The Resource WIP Thread 3

Celianna · 2017-08-14T11:36:01+0900

The Resource WIP Thread 3 This thread is meant for users who are creating, or editing their own resources, to post their work-in-progress (abbreviated to WIP) and get feedback on their work such as criticism, advice or simple comments. If you have any game screenshots or maps to show off (including video trailers), please post them in the Game & Map Screenshot Thread. This is not the thread to look for resources - anything posted in this thread cannot be used! Previous WIP threads: The Resource WIP thread 1 The Resource WIP thread 2 Please read and abide by these rules before posting and or commenting: 1. Sprites, portraits, faces, tiles, logos, songs, sound effects - are all allowed as long as it has to do with RPG Maker or Indie Game Maker. 2. When posting your WIP in this thread, please remember that you allow other members to edit that work for criticism. 3. Any work posted in here is not up for grabs and it solemnly belongs to the original creator. Yes, this means you cannot use any resources posted here for yourself, unless it is meant for giving criticism. If the creator eventually posts this in an actual topic in one of the resource forums, then go ahead. Until then, what gets posted here, stays here. 4. When posting a WIP that is not 100% your creation, please note which parts aren't made by you so people can give you more accurate feedback. 5. Please be civil and constructive when handing out criticism. Do not post things such as 'this sucks!' or even 'it's awesome!'. Point out why a work doesn't look so good, and what they can do to improve it. If you want to compliment someone, point out what you think they did well. 6. Please refrain from re-posting your work, unless you've made some edits on it since the last time you posted it. If no one has commented on your work, and it has fallen behind by at least 2 pages, feel free to repost it then. 7. If you have a lot of work to show, please put them behind in spoiler tags! If you want to quote someone's work, I recommend to simply refer to them by name @Username, or to put the quoted work in spoiler tags. This prevents the thread from cluttering up too much. Preferably, don't quote images at all. That's it, remember to be civil and give constructive criticism!

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Holder

#1423 Jun 6, 2023, 12:23 PM Source

Keiyu said:
Lol. I made a few tubs.. but frankly they look a lil bland to me. But if I try and add more detail, they end up lookin dirty. Porcelain is just... smooth white. My friend suggested clawfeets tubs.. maybe I'll do both. Watch'y'all think of my tubs? Any idea how to improve em without drastic revamping? Or are they just ok as is? Someday I'm thinkin' I might actually sell resources.. not that great at it yet but.. maybe somebody would like it for a few bucks xD
I think the way you have the inner edge at the moment looks very sharp due to the darkest colours you've used. Smooth curves wouldn't create a dark line when it curves. Also the shadows on the up/down one is indicating that it curves in towards the top edge, and the bottom of the tubs inner part wouldn't be visible.
It's good form, just the shading indicates something you're not intending.
Holder

#1424 Jun 6, 2023, 09:42 PM Source

Got the design finalised and with the stick weapon. Got the idea for that weapon from a little wand my girls used to play with when they were little

Like this one
Avery

#1425 Jun 6, 2023, 09:44 PM Source

That looks very familiar ;D
Would quote the intro that I can still sing along, but you all would probably not recognize it because I only know the German lyrics xD
Holder

#1426 Jun 6, 2023, 10:15 PM Source

XD No way! I never realised that @Avery - Oh well a cameo stick in the resources then, I might hold you to a rendition of the German version.
I was thinking it looked a lot like a Peach dress so the alternative colour had to be Yellow, Princess Frog and the random demon princess:

Now to split it up and animate it :/
Kes

#1427 Jun 7, 2023, 10:41 AM Source

@Holder I like the new design, and am in awe at your skills when it comes to animating. Getting the skirt of that dress right would leave most people stuck on stage one.
BobbyLily

#1428 Jul 3, 2023, 05:30 PM Source

I just made this face sheet recently, though something about #3 and #6 is bugging me and I can't pinpoint what. Posting here to see if said bugging is justified, and if so, what could be the cause.

The Face Sheet in Question
alice_gristle

#1429 Jul 3, 2023, 05:37 PM Source

@BobbyLily I wud maybe try recolouring the drippin' parts of their face? Just to make 'em look a li'l less like their face is melting.:kaoswt:White oughta do it maybe? Don't know 'bout #3, at a glance it doesn't strike me as the odd one out...
BobbyLily

#1430 Jul 3, 2023, 05:43 PM Source

@alice_gristle Like this?

The "Like This?" in Question
alice_gristle

#1431 Jul 3, 2023, 05:43 PM Source

Better for sure! :kaoluv:
pawsplay

#1432 Jul 22, 2023, 08:30 PM Source

So, I wanted to use some palm trees for my temperate coast towns, but I didn't want them to have tropical coconuts. So, I made an edit of the RTP palm tree to remove the coconuts. This is probably my first time making a purely free hand edit. How did I do?
LunarFlareStudios

#1433 Jul 22, 2023, 10:17 PM Source

You actually did pretty well. This is how I started learning to edit--by making tiny edits like this until I felt more comfortable making larger edits. I hope you can expand on your abilities with a little more practice!
pawsplay

#1434 Jul 22, 2023, 10:33 PM Source

I used the eye dropper tool a lot, did some penciling, and went over it with a paintbrush stroke. I tried to focus on matching the lighting. I thought maybe if I focused on that and kept the edits small, I would be okay.
LunarFlareStudios

#1435 Jul 22, 2023, 10:35 PM Source

Well, you succeeded! And to think 5-year-old me thought the eyedropper was pointless... of course, now that I'm editing, it's a huge help when it comes to getting things to match up.
mlogan

#1436 Jul 22, 2023, 11:45 PM Source

@pawsplay I merged your thread with the existing Work In Progress thread.
karusomine

#1437 Jul 25, 2023, 08:00 AM Source

Starting to make some icons, but I'm too impatient for dot-by-dot pixel art. So I use regular paintbrush tool to draw them on the spot. Because of that the edges looks kinda blurry.

Are they looks fine? Or too fuzzy?
StrawberryFlower

#1438 Jul 25, 2023, 04:06 PM Source

I think they look good! Icons don't have to be pixel art!
karusomine

#1439 Jul 25, 2023, 07:02 PM Source

StrawberryFlower said:
I think they look good! Icons don't have to be pixel art!
That's good to know. Thank you ^^
Holder

#1440 Jul 27, 2023, 12:52 PM Source

Some new weapons for characters, been trying to get back into a flow whilst working on the Samurai character.
karusomine

#1441 Jul 28, 2023, 07:26 AM Source

Holder said:
View attachment 270938 View attachment 270939 View attachment 270940
Some new weapons for characters, been trying to get back into a flow whilst working on the Samurai character.
Love the designs. They all looks cool!
Holder

#1442 Aug 13, 2023, 06:15 PM Source

karusomine said:
Love the designs. They all looks cool!
Thanks :) they've all since been completed.

Been working on this today, trying to figure out body shape with stinger and if it needs little legs too.