The Resource WIP Thread 3

Celianna · 2017-08-14T11:36:01+0900

The Resource WIP Thread 3 This thread is meant for users who are creating, or editing their own resources, to post their work-in-progress (abbreviated to WIP) and get feedback on their work such as criticism, advice or simple comments. If you have any game screenshots or maps to show off (including video trailers), please post them in the Game & Map Screenshot Thread. This is not the thread to look for resources - anything posted in this thread cannot be used! Previous WIP threads: The Resource WIP thread 1 The Resource WIP thread 2 Please read and abide by these rules before posting and or commenting: 1. Sprites, portraits, faces, tiles, logos, songs, sound effects - are all allowed as long as it has to do with RPG Maker or Indie Game Maker. 2. When posting your WIP in this thread, please remember that you allow other members to edit that work for criticism. 3. Any work posted in here is not up for grabs and it solemnly belongs to the original creator. Yes, this means you cannot use any resources posted here for yourself, unless it is meant for giving criticism. If the creator eventually posts this in an actual topic in one of the resource forums, then go ahead. Until then, what gets posted here, stays here. 4. When posting a WIP that is not 100% your creation, please note which parts aren't made by you so people can give you more accurate feedback. 5. Please be civil and constructive when handing out criticism. Do not post things such as 'this sucks!' or even 'it's awesome!'. Point out why a work doesn't look so good, and what they can do to improve it. If you want to compliment someone, point out what you think they did well. 6. Please refrain from re-posting your work, unless you've made some edits on it since the last time you posted it. If no one has commented on your work, and it has fallen behind by at least 2 pages, feel free to repost it then. 7. If you have a lot of work to show, please put them behind in spoiler tags! If you want to quote someone's work, I recommend to simply refer to them by name @Username, or to put the quoted work in spoiler tags. This prevents the thread from cluttering up too much. Preferably, don't quote images at all. That's it, remember to be civil and give constructive criticism!

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hiddenone

#943 Jun 20, 2019, 07:06 PM Source

@Pancaketophat The map thread isn't for asking questions about sprites, so I've merged your post with the WIP thread instead. Besides redrawing things so the torso and limbs are longer., the only way I know of to make the sprite bigger is to just double the size.
Pancaketophat

#944 Jun 20, 2019, 07:13 PM Source

hiddenone said:
@Pancaketophat The map thread isn't for asking questions about sprites, so I've merged your post with the WIP thread instead. Besides redrawing things so the torso and limbs are longer., the only way I know of to make the sprite bigger is to just double the size.

Sorry. Didn't know this was the wrong thread :L
hiddenone

#945 Jun 20, 2019, 07:18 PM Source

@Pancaketophat No worries, we were all new once. :) I did a quick edit to your sprite, it seems like it should be pretty easy to make it taller if you just take some time to lengthen the legs and torso.
Pancaketophat

#946 Jun 20, 2019, 08:31 PM Source

hiddenone said:
@Pancaketophat No worries, we were all new once. :) I did a quick edit to your sprite, it seems like it should be pretty easy to make it taller if you just take some time to lengthen the legs and torso.

View attachment 117875

Woaahh!! Wow.. Yeah that works :0
When I did try to make him taller, the sprites would clip into eachother? When he walked around there was an extra pair of his own legs ontop of his head. Is there a setting in MV where I can change the size of the grid thing?
Pancaketophat

#947 Jun 20, 2019, 08:35 PM Source

PixelHeart said:
:D Getting better! Soon, I will be the nature master! Any feed back is appreciated! :DDD

It looks great! Do you do the color variation manually, or is there something like a "noise" brush in the program you use?
Bastrophian

#948 Jun 20, 2019, 08:52 PM Source

@Pancaketophat - Oh, that tree is old news. I made a way better tree a few days later. Still not the master of nature, but still getting alot better. :3

EDIT: And I cant remember, but I may have used a noise brush a little, but Ive since found that that does NOT bring good results. I was just trying to be lazy. The best results require precise, meticulous, intentionally laid pixels.
Pancaketophat

#949 Jun 23, 2019, 06:56 PM Source

I'm making headshots for Jaree. This is a lot of fun! It's fun drawing more extreme emotions, considering I don't do them as much as I should. I also made a bloody variant of the crying sprite, but I'm not sure about the rules pertaining to gore, so I'm hesitant to post it. Even so, I'm not sure if I'm ever really gonna use it at all. Better to just leave it in the files and let people wonder what horrifying stuff I had in mind for the demo, lmao.

Bloody version
Puffer

#950 Jun 28, 2019, 10:36 AM Source

I've been working on this weight set for quite a while now, but I just cant seem to get right. Any clues/feedback would be very appreciated!
cl4ptr4p

#951 Jul 2, 2019, 11:21 AM Source

@Knayter - Hi, to be honest the weight set looks on spot! But one thing that's bothering me is the distance between these two poles:

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Perhaps extending the distance between the two poles would help. :rwink:

I inducted a recent color study on blue hues as highlights and shadings of a portrait for my friend, although I feel like some colors are a bit off. Would be nice to get some feedback. :rswt

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MadRamDesigns

#952 Jul 18, 2019, 05:40 AM Source

Hello.
I'm trying to closely mimic mv rtp style, I'd appreciate some others' opinions who are more familiar to the content. Does this look like it fits with existing assets on B or C tilesets? I'm aware the ground shadow needs work.
Thanks.
Marquise*

#953 Jul 19, 2019, 08:14 PM Source

*sees vehicles*

HUBBA HUBBA HUBBA!

Are they to share? I wanna show this to a game creator!
(I want to make stuff that great too ^^ )
MadRamDesigns

#954 Jul 20, 2019, 12:16 AM Source

Thanks!
yes, you can show it.
I plan on starting a proper mv resource thread in August, prob have some alternative orthographic views of that.
Bastrophian

#955 Aug 5, 2019, 10:45 PM Source

Needed I test of skill, also wanted to see what everyone else thinks. all feed back is much appreciated X3
VitaliaDi

#956 Aug 9, 2019, 07:06 PM Source

@Pancaketophat Paint.NET is a free program and great for pixel art. You'd be able to resize that with the "nearest neighbor" option.

@PixelHeart I think he looks pretty great. Nice pose and perspective. He could use a shadow I think and his left foot is turned out a tiny bit too much :)

Working on the main sprites for my Revallia game. I used Zelda Oracle game sprites as inspiration since I love the style so much.
lusitop12

#957 Aug 11, 2019, 08:09 AM Source

the other day I was like.... emmmm why not? I was using default or kaduki's one since I begin with this. so I was determined to finally change that. soo here we are.

I'm presenting to u the old (kaduki ones) and the news (create by me) CHARAAAAASSSSS

I waiting for ur comment below (wink)
Kes

#958 Aug 11, 2019, 12:47 PM Source

General Discussion is for looking at broad themes that affect the making of games. It is not for getting feedback on sprites you have made.

I'm on my phone and it is being particularly awkward about getting links, otherwise I'd merge this for you into the WIP thread in Resource Support. You will have to wait until another Mod comes along to do that. I thought I'd just let you know why this thread is not being approved.
slimmmeiske2

#959 Aug 11, 2019, 02:24 PM Source

@lusitop12 I've merged your thread with the Resource WIP thread.
Omega Weapon

#960 Aug 11, 2019, 09:22 PM Source

It's been a while since I've posted something here.

Working on a base. I'm not entirely happy with this, as it feels like the head is way too feminine for the body.
arms are very WIP

It's supposed to be a 17 to 18-year old... so well... almost mature.
Okay, maybe that body is a bit TOO much
GalacticGod

#961 Aug 11, 2019, 10:26 PM Source

Been trying to create a Stormtrooper (from Star Wars) in the tradition RPGMaker MV style. I'm not sure about the helmet yet:

Does it look correct or does it still need work (and if it needs work what suggestions could you offer)?
Marquise*

#962 Aug 12, 2019, 10:06 PM Source

I wish I could help; I am not sure of the angle of the mouth piece. If also it is obtainable in spriting (some angles and curves gets crazy that way)