The Resource WIP Thread 3

Celianna · 2017-08-14T11:36:01+0900

The Resource WIP Thread 3 This thread is meant for users who are creating, or editing their own resources, to post their work-in-progress (abbreviated to WIP) and get feedback on their work such as criticism, advice or simple comments. If you have any game screenshots or maps to show off (including video trailers), please post them in the Game & Map Screenshot Thread. This is not the thread to look for resources - anything posted in this thread cannot be used! Previous WIP threads: The Resource WIP thread 1 The Resource WIP thread 2 Please read and abide by these rules before posting and or commenting: 1. Sprites, portraits, faces, tiles, logos, songs, sound effects - are all allowed as long as it has to do with RPG Maker or Indie Game Maker. 2. When posting your WIP in this thread, please remember that you allow other members to edit that work for criticism. 3. Any work posted in here is not up for grabs and it solemnly belongs to the original creator. Yes, this means you cannot use any resources posted here for yourself, unless it is meant for giving criticism. If the creator eventually posts this in an actual topic in one of the resource forums, then go ahead. Until then, what gets posted here, stays here. 4. When posting a WIP that is not 100% your creation, please note which parts aren't made by you so people can give you more accurate feedback. 5. Please be civil and constructive when handing out criticism. Do not post things such as 'this sucks!' or even 'it's awesome!'. Point out why a work doesn't look so good, and what they can do to improve it. If you want to compliment someone, point out what you think they did well. 6. Please refrain from re-posting your work, unless you've made some edits on it since the last time you posted it. If no one has commented on your work, and it has fallen behind by at least 2 pages, feel free to repost it then. 7. If you have a lot of work to show, please put them behind in spoiler tags! If you want to quote someone's work, I recommend to simply refer to them by name @Username, or to put the quoted work in spoiler tags. This prevents the thread from cluttering up too much. Preferably, don't quote images at all. That's it, remember to be civil and give constructive criticism!

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Sharm

#423 Jan 17, 2018, 09:42 PM Source

New is loads better but the non-symmetrical shading might be harder to work with. Slower to create at least.
_Chronos_

#424 Jan 18, 2018, 03:34 AM Source

Redid the hair since I decided to simplify things.

New > Old
Sharm

#425 Jan 18, 2018, 04:37 AM Source

New!
EpicFILE

#426 Jan 18, 2018, 06:59 AM Source

Currently I'm working on some RTP remakes for fun.
Here's the actor 1-6 remake.

She's one of my favorite MV females along with Therese.
The left one is her with her regular red eyes, the right one is her with black eyes.
(honestly I like the black eyes more, but that'll contradict her sprite xD)

I'm gonna release it along with the other actor 1 characters. :D
ZheroIsland

#427 Jan 18, 2018, 09:37 AM Source

I created this art for my 3D game, the inspire from very old RPG horror game IB, and Witch house. :kaojoy:

The make up , and dress layout is from Victorian era.
Makeup intentionally make to pale to support horror atmosphere.. :kaoluv:

Now I'm decision to making her skirt. any recomendation for her skirt? or for this character that should be improve? :kaohi:
EpicFILE

#428 Jan 18, 2018, 12:29 PM Source

@ZheroIsland
Do you plan to make a lineless art or lined art in the finished version?
Personally I'd go for lineless considering the art style. (so the lines on her clothes need to be erased)
Anyway, the art already capture the horror atmosphere even though it's unfinished.
Great!

About her skirt, maybe a long rippled skirt would be a good fit?
ZheroIsland

#429 Jan 18, 2018, 01:00 PM Source

@EpicFILE Yeah, I will change her line color outside clothes at the end :kaoluv:
thankyou for your advice :kaojoy::kaohi:
Sharm

#430 Jan 18, 2018, 04:03 PM Source

@ZheroIsland This section is for helping workshop artwork to be used in RPG Maker. It's not meant to be helpful for those not using the engine and is likely to stray into advice that would be not useful in 3D engines. We do not support other engines here.
ZheroIsland

#431 Jan 18, 2018, 04:15 PM Source

@Sharm You are free to delete my post. Thanks
Sakurra

#432 Jan 18, 2018, 06:49 PM Source

I'm not a very good spriter and I would appreciate if someone else could look over and see something I can't. I'm pretty okay with what I made but I think it still needs more work. And I'm not sure what. I think it may need more colors?

Like does the anatomy look okay, etc? I used a reference of an actual sprite to create this one. I just think a fresh pair of eyes other than mine could help identify how to make it better. :kaoswt:

Edit: Oh, I just realized I posted this in the wrong form. I apologize.:kaomad2:
Kes

#433 Jan 18, 2018, 07:43 PM Source

@evmaster I will merge your post with the Resource WIP Thread.
Prez

#434 Jan 19, 2018, 04:21 AM Source

@jjbones123 Thanks! I quite like all of your sprites, as well; they have a nice, crisp cartoony style to them. I hope to see more like that!

Anyways, I've lately been experimenting with the POP Horror City style, and today I made these two:

Yes, it's Judy Hopps and Nick Wilde from Zootopia. I'm overall pretty happy with how they came out, especially since I completed them in less than a day (which is pretty fast by my standards), but I wasn't sure if the 'mouthless' style the rest of the characters have really worked well for them, so I included alternate versions which have visible mouths. Which one is better, would you say? Regardless, I do plan on making a full sprite sheet for them eventually (with tails that sway back and forth, natch).
Sharm

#435 Jan 19, 2018, 06:34 AM Source

Mouthless on Judy, keep the smirk on Nick. I think mixing isn't a bad thing here and it keeps Judy her ridiculously adorable self and Nick just isn't himself without a nice smirk. Plus, fox's mouths are more obvious IRL.
_Chronos_

#436 Jan 19, 2018, 06:58 AM Source

Finished on all sides
Goddiga

#437 Jan 19, 2018, 11:57 AM Source

I am curious about the correct perspective and other factors for these backgrounds.

Which one is correct in terms of perspective and other aspects need to be concerned for background? Or maybe neither? There will be two sprites showing on the left and right side of the picture. Thank you!

*Sprites example:

*Notes : I didn't draw these myself. It is a commission I paid for my game.
Sharm

#438 Jan 19, 2018, 03:34 PM Source

They're all correct. It's just a matter of which one you like best.
_Chronos_

#439 Jan 20, 2018, 11:01 AM Source

Just took a shot in the dark here, updated color pallet and such.

I've also noticed the larger the sprite is the less colors you actually need for shading.
Sharm

#440 Jan 20, 2018, 03:14 PM Source

That's not actually it. You've become better at using your colors more effectively. Your earlier stuff always had too many colors. You actually need less colors the smaller something is.
_Chronos_

#441 Jan 20, 2018, 10:15 PM Source

And all idles are now reshaded, time to basically redo animation (thankfully..it's only a reshade :) )

Yes..I'm just flipping my side sprite sue me.
callmedan

#442 Jan 21, 2018, 12:13 PM Source

I'm trying to make a ruined temple by editing XP RTP tiles and few tiles by Dot Art World and Avery. Don't mind those trees and the cliff, I just want to see if the temple fits the scene.