how do these character designs look? some of them i definitely like more than others. if you're wondering why they're all in their underwear, its because this is what they look like before they pick a class. also, im using a few custom generator parts to spice them up a bit. there is this problem with some of them having more shading in their hair that others, but thats because i changed a few of the colors in the default generator color pallet in order to make more vibrant and non ugly shades. (that default red color is a real nightmare.) i didnt change their eye colors because that wouldve been way too much of a hassle. besides, blue basically goes good with any color.
here they are:
I actually really like the whole rainbow of colors. Are you planning to keep the designs so vibrant in the finished product?
I'm trying to write a new story, about a man harnessing the power of all the elements trying to reach godhood... now we have the traditional 4 elements: fire/water/earth/air... but i kind of think that water is somewhat... underwhelming, so I might swap it with ice. Now about the other 2 elements... should I go with light/darkness? Maybe something else?
Any ideas? :kaoswt:
Well, traditional elements could include wood and metal.
You might also consider electricity.
I don't think water is underwhelming:
People are mostly water.
Water erodes earth, and is better vs fire than ice.
Drowning is not fun.
Long ago a force that could only be known as the will of the earth instilled within the first women upon creation inconceivable power in order to maintain life throughout the planet. These women were vigilant yet ever merciful and lived alongside all of their other human beings in their immortality. though invisibly they also attempted to maintain the balance of social norms amongst their fellow man, seeing to it that wherever possible no one had to conform to a specific set of ideals based on gender, orientation, or race.
for a while this maintenance was simple, as war wasnt yet a massively thought about concept.
this was before a church with a theocratic political agenda began annexing ill-gotten land and slaughtering witches
Enter Rosa, a witch thought long slain by the theocracy brought back from the brink of oblivion by the wills of previously slain withces all banning together in death and resurrecting her in order to stop them
[Character bios will eventually go here]
what do you all think of this idea, what gamepaly do you envision?
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Please don't take this as me being combative, I genuinely want to know more about your story.
There are a lot of "church bad, women good" stories out there. Talk to me about how yours is different.
If no one has to conform to ideals based on gender, orientation etc, why is that only women have this power?
How many immortal women are there? Are they really all 'ever merciful?' Not a single one of them ever used their inconceivable power for selfish purposes?
i'm going to write a story about a young knight fighting to save a princess... with a twist. he's aware that he's inside an rpg, and knows all the rules. but what he doesn't know is that he's not the only one who's in on it.
someone is pulling people, actual real life humans into this game, trapping them in a virtual world for all eternity and leaving the fate of their human shells unknown, building an ever-growing world of once human souls, now turned into mere strings of codes and expository dialogue.
i want it to be a light hearted comedy throughout for the most part, and sprinkle in only a bit of horror and drama towards the end once the twist is revealed. does this sound like it could work?
really all i have so far is my idea, some dialogue and a few design ideas laying around that i may or may not use for this
(character design concepts below):
Oh, I really like this twist!
There's so many isekai out there right now, I haven't read all of them- but in my limited experience, this is a unique iteration of the idea.
My favorite of your designs has got to be the redhead with horns.
@slimmmeiske2 thank you! I'm used to a different forum system!