Sete Ossos

A month and a half living in this new home, away from everything. The neighbors who have are old, what makes a girl to spend most of her time alone in her own home.  Your school is far away and the holidays just started.
 
Clara is a girl of only 10 years. His relationship with his mother is not easy, Clara tries at all times to approach, but always ends up happening something that makes them come back to square one. This occurs since I remember. His father is always traveling because of his job, so the time they spend together is usually very good although slightly.
 
Her grandmother is a médium, and the family usually live the basis of their guidelines. Clara does not complain, but do not really believe ... Even being forbidden to leave the house. Never experienced a real supernatural situation.
 
Everything begins to change with a whisper of a shadow ...
 
 
 
There are two versions. The sent and competitor.(RTP include 200MB)
Non RTP (RTP not included 20MB)
Download page
  Dropbox Non RTP
For those who play, if can comment. 
Did at least one comment from someone, because then I can improve in my next games.
http://contest.rpgmakerweb.com/game/view/id/405#.U7WVx5RdUzk
Thanks.

Hey, this looks really good. Downloading it right now :)

Thank you :3
I expect a sincere comment, because I really want to improve in the future.


My games are never played when casting and almost never get comments, I assume you are even my mistakes XD

Hi there, felipefalcon,

Is there any chance you could upload non-RTP version through another service such as google docs or dropbox? I'm having trouble downloading from mediafire. 

Your game seems pretty cool, Felipe. I can see by the screenshots and the description that the grammar could use a little help, though... if you'd like, I could help you with that, we can talk by PM in Portuguese.

Parabéns pelo release :)

Yes. I try do later.Wait.

Thank you.

Obrigado pelo post^~

This 2 Links are don't exist anymore.

Sorry, I took the English version of the game of all the places that divulged.


The version had serious spelling mistakes because I did not know much of the language, which compromised the understanding of history.
(I only speak and write Portuguese correctly)
I do not know when or if the same will have an English version of the game. But if someone who has ability and interest in translating the game, I am willing to send the open-source game. (In its current version v2)


I am committed to a new game too, so it will be difficult for me to find the courage to touch this old game XD


http://i.imgur.com/K6ojzax.png


- Google Translate -


Version in portuguese.


Sete Ossos v2 [Independent] 34MB

Hello! I just downloaded th english version, but I'm stuck...

 



So far, although the English are really confusing ( I suggest you could ask a proofreader for translating this game), I simply like the game. I'm curious to how the story will end, so please if anyone can help me, I really can't wait to continue this game. Thanks in advance.

-regards, Fumaira