PAGE IS ON HOLD [DIFFERENT PLANS]

This topic is CLOSED

Why?

"Faith" has stopped the development. But a new one is made in association with another gaming company. You'll find everything about the game in my new signature.

Please add samples of your writing and mapping.

Samples added :)

Demo of "Faith" incoming, the demo is to show my work. Again this game is canceled and will be only developed further if it gets many likes.

It's compressing and almost here, thanks for your patience.

New developing update:

Chapter one is expanding (Longer than the demo).

http://gyazo.com/f18d45ed21d868ce6a55c854277e225d

Here's another sample of the mapping i'm doing now.

I'll keep you updated!

development is on standby for a limited time...i don't know when i'll continue but at the moment i'm really busy in real life.

I'm continuing the develop, you can still join me if you want. Chapter one isn't yet completed.

Anyway, I'll keep you updated.

MAJOR UPDATE ANNOUNCED, CHECK THE POST

I'm searching for artists on the whole web now...don't got much luck here at all...I've found some artists with great talent. I've contacted them and I'm waiting for a response...I don't know but I got so much great plans for my game twisting around my head...but I can't...do it...alone...

Played the DEMO while having my tea. Just my two cents here:

You might have a great story to share but you fail at expossing it. You need to polish your mapping and story telling-skills if you plan on making it succesful and attractive for recruits.

What I mean: if the game isn't gonna have combat in it (not a bad thing) then you gotta focus on making it visually appealing.

Also, you introduce characters and plot too fast! The girl asks the entire town about the green hat man but then she lies when asked what's she searching for? and then... after a few lines she reveals the secret to a stranger! You gotta go slower IMO. Show the dull protagonist life, how everyday is the same thing, and how this girl 'Faith' catches his attention and transforms his life. Make the player/reader feel it not just say "My life sucks".

Take a look at well-known company titles and try to OBSERVE everything. That helps.

Not meant to be harsh I just want to help you on your game as I'm working on mine too and I know it can be hard and frutrating at times.

Good luck! :)

I'm sorry to say to you all...I'm learning how to use parralax mapping with GIMP and all that. With that option, I can do alot more than this game Faith.

So...it's hard to say...and hard to consider cause of all the hard work on it. But it just won't work. If I've learned how to use parralax mapping the I'll develop another game, wich will be better...very very much better then this game. The mapping in Faith is just crap. Everything's crap exept the story. So...please don't close this topic. I'm continuing this topic when I'm ready for parralax mapping. I'll change everything until then. So for now. Recruitment page is on hold.

That's it.

Improved demo added...it's the last one...