My first sprite! (Would like feedback)

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  1. xcom
    #1 Source
    Hello everyone!

    I made my own first custom sprite.  It's basically edits and recolors of some generator parts.  I would really love some feedback on it to make it look better.  I really wanted it to have the blue gloves just like in the picture, but couldn't make it come out right.

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    Shimei Ryomou sprite 004.png

    Charater I'm trying to make.

    The Character is Shimei Ryomou from Ikki Tousen/Battle Vixens.

    A word of warning if you google her.  The show was very fan service filled, so may not be safe for work.
    EDIT:  Added a green background to make the white parts stand out better.

    I would love feed back or suggestions!

    Thanks!
  2. Shelby
    #2 Source
    I love that anime! She doesn't ever use a sword though...Still the sprite looks good.
  3. xcom
    #3 Source
    Shelby said:
    I love that anime! She doesn't ever use a sword though...Still the sprite looks good.
    Yeah I know she doesn't use a sword, but it was the only decent full length frontal non-fanservice picture I could find at the moment.  Hehe....
  4. Sharm
    #4 Source
    Could you please cut the official image out and link to it instead? The rules in this section are that you must have redistribution rights for images.
  5. xcom
    #5 Source
    Sharm said:
    Could you please cut the official image out and link to it instead? The rules in this section are that you must have redistribution rights for images.
    Sorry about that.  Just wanted to show an example of what I was trying to design.

    It's been removed and added a link to the picture instead.
  6. Sharm
    #6 Source
    Thank you! :)