MV - My first game... perhaps you may give it a try...

The mapping is generally good, I felt the hospital was an appropriate size and appropriately detailed. I know this is a difference in design opinions, but when there are so many potential objects of interest, I wouldn’t include failure messages for everything that isn’t important. I’d rather try to activate something and get no response than read “it’s just a bunch of patient files and junk” for the 29th time.

I’m not a political creature, so I don’t know if any of the premise of the game’s setting is a reference to real-world situations. I don’t immediately see why the mother’s sickness and its medicine couldn’t be real ones - or, for the effort spent on other names in the intro, why you might not choose a more realistic name than Med-X.

Why tell the players to use Z for Action? Your game doesn’t support WASD movement, so there’s no reason for them to have their hand near there. One would either use the mouse or be using arrow keys, which are right next to Enter.

There’s an eventing/mapping error in the grey door in the upper right of the first floor. Going through it takes you to a hallway where the door you just walked up through is up from you again. This seems like a mapping error because, obviously, the door should be down from you. And if it’s supposed to represent you going down a staircase or something, then the character should be transferred to be facing down rather than still up on the new map.

A similar thing is set up when you exit the hospital from the door all the way to the right - you go up through the door, then outside the building the door is up from you again.

The idea that your flashlight doesn’t actually permanently go away but you need to keep reactivating it from your inventory is kind of annoying. Also, adding the instructions “(Do not forget this)” is rather silly.

Why not make the flashlight’s light be cone-shaped, like a flashlight? The way the circle slowly spreads out from the character is also not similar to how a flashlight works.

In the basement hallway, coming to the last locked door looks a bit odd because it’s two tiles tall when all the other doors have been only one tile. I’ve never been in a hospital where one storage room door is suddenly twice the height as a normal one.

Personal note - I’m not at all a fan of the “breathing” effect on enemies. I think simply having a static image looks much better than stretching that image back and forth.

Why the heck are there spells? You went to all this effort in the introduction to set up a very realistic country and political situation, there’s absolutely no mention of this being in some kind of alternate reality where we’d expect magic(k) to be real.

I stopped playing after finding mom and he started cursing because they were a frankly stupid combination of words and that ruined my interest in the character.

There are some minor grammar mistakes, “find a some medicine”, “Eyedrops was found,” “An 2024 medical textbook,” “a NPW key,” “I suppose it okay,” “they belongs,” “Six doses of Med-X was found”.

The skill messages are also wrong - e.g. Heal “recovers HP 200” or whatever the value was.