How you think about this art?

Hey guys im working right now on a tiny game, that is a copy of a manga wich has only 4 books..

I want start try do art by myself and dont pay for first games and own art is always better then payd i think.

So i want some feedback... what i should do better..

its my first time pixelart.

There's a thread for this sort of thing. http://forums.rpgmakerweb.com/index.php?/topic/48-the-resource-wip-thread/