Doing something nice for my girl - I need help

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  1. Wyn Wizard
    #1 Source
    Hello there RMW, its me Wyn Wizard.

    I have, over the past few years, come to know a lot of you. And some of you have even helped me through some pretty difficult times, and I thank you. Well, i'm sure you are wondering why i need help with my girl. I want to give her a song that is from my heart for her. I have the lyrics, i just need a melody and maybe someone to sing it. I would sing it but i seriously sound like and i want her to have something beautiful. I would prefer a rock type genre applied to my song if possible.

    Here is the song:

    Spoiler
    The Rose and The Shadow: Tonight
     
    -verse 1-
    Tonight, as we stand under twilight.
    We search to find the light,
    That has faded, left us jaded.
    Your eyes, they sparkle in the night.
    Showing me that its alright,
    to be here, to stay here.

    -chorus-
    Cause I, want to see the light.
    See it shine into your eyes,
    See the world with you tonight.
    I wanna be close, don't wanna let go!
    Tonight.

    -verse 2-
    As I, struggle for something true,
    I'm still here with you.
    But I'm broken, I am frozen.
    And you, help me to start anew.
    Take a chance, just me and you.
    Yes lets go there, I can stay there.
     
    -chorus-
    Cause I, want to see the light.
    See it shine into your eyes,
    See the world with you tonight.
    I wanna be close, don't wanna let go!
    Tonight.
     
    -verse 3-
    I want to stay here forever,
    No I wont go away.
    We can start here together.
    Yes this is where I'll stay.
     
    [some sort of guitar solo I suppose]
     
    -outro-
    And now, as we wake to see the light,
    these still hope we'll be alright.
    Cause we'll stand tall,
    We'll fight through it all!
    Tonight.
    i would really appreciate the help guys. And Hyde, i know you do some pretty sick stuff so can i ask you to do me a solid and try to do the melody for this song?

    Thanks so much guys for looking through this. and i hope everyone of you finds your happy place, and i know you all will. I have faith in you all. Thank you so much RMW for being there for me once again! :')
  2. mlogan
    #2 Source
    I can't help out at all but just had to say - awwww! How sweet of you. I know she will appreciate even just the lyrics, though I hope someone can help you out.
  3. whitesphere
    #3 Source
    I second what mlogan said.  I'm sure someone here will help you out, but I'm sure she will deeply appreciate the effort you've put in.

    I love gifts that come from the heart and were made with care much more than store bought things, myself.  :)

    (Edit)

    GrandmaDeb has a great idea.  The best thing to do is to find the song that has the most meaning to you both as a couple.  Maybe it's the first song you heard when you were together.  Maybe it's a song that always reminds you of her.  Maybe it's her favorite song.

    Songs are great ways to evoke strong emotions, but the best one is the one that has the most meaning to you both --- or if you're not sure, the most meaning to her. :)

    Best of luck!
  4. GrandmaDeb
    #4 Source
    I have a suggestion:


    find an instrumental musical track that suits your feeling, and read it.


    Make a recording.


    Add pictures of the two of you, maybe some places you go (not restaurants!.)


    Make a youtube video or put it on one of those digital frames that rotates pictures and plays music.


    Waaaaay more personal, she'll love it.
  5. Wyn Wizard
    #5 Source
    thats a nice idea Mrs. Deb. thank you guys. i'll see what i can do.
  6. Wyn Wizard
    #6 Source
    I have a new song!

    Spoiler
    The Rose and The Shadow - Anything

    -Verse 1-
    As we walk along this road we call life
    Filled with loss, and love, and our strife
    Only one thing seems to stay the same

    And as I looked all around me
    I began to see a new reality
    One where I was finally
    Happily here with you now

    -chorus-
    I'd cross a thousand miles just to see your face
    I'd swim across the seven seas just to feel your embrace
    I'd hold the stars in the sky
    I'll be here when you cry
    Cause i'll do anything to be by your side

    -Verse 2-
    Now the world is standing still
    I can't explain the things that I feel
    You are thing that turns my darkness to light

    And while the world keeps turning
    I'll still be here yearning
    For the love that no one else can see
    You are the one for me yeah!

    -chorus-
    I'd cross a thousand miles just to see your face
    I'd swim across the seven seas just for your embrace
    I'd hold the stars in the sky
    I'll be there when you cry
    Cause I'll do anything to be by your side

    -breakdown-
    I'd search the whole world round to see you
    I'd follow you through the galaxy just to be with you
    I wasn't whole until you out be back together
    Now I'll be here with you forever

    -chorus-
    I'd cross a thousand miles just to see your face
    I'd swim across the seven seas just for your embrace
    I'd hold the stars in the sky
    I'll be there when you cry
    Cause i'll do anything to be by your side

    Anything to be by your side (3x repeat)
    Yes anything, anything to be by your side
    what do you guys think?
  7. whitesphere
    #7 Source
    I think it's very nice, although I have a hard time "hearing" the song in my head.

    But I'm sure she'll appreciate it :)
  8. Wyn Wizard
    #8 Source
    can i have this thread closed please? since i no longer have someone to do this for i wish not to see this thread anymore. please and thank you.
  9. doncht
    #9 Source
    I'm sure whatever surprise you do for her Wyn, she'll appreciate just by the effort alone. Girls aren't that complicated to please.