Does these actors looks epic bad?

I design some unique and epic actors with stylish personality. If they look bad or they have something harmful for you. Write a feedback.

Jack, a character, whose father was a master magician who died in a war of dark shadows.

He likes to play magic cards, his father teaches him how to play it, and after the death of his father, he becomes a successful master of playing cards. (Magic cards as his weapon" )

Hair colour blue, purple clothing with red cloak. Light skin tone, blue eyes.

Zilch, an expert female, who acts like very innocent person, she wear glasses just for show off.

She plays tricks with people to steal money or items found in their pockets. (Dual knifes')

White hair, wears sky blue glasses, sexy clothing. Blue eyes. Her skin tone is a little darker.

Nice characters. Although... what does "play magic cards" mean? Do you mean that they're magic cards thrown as weapons, like Gambit from X-Men?
 

Jack kind of sounds like Yugi from Yu-Gi-Oh.

I like that Zilch wears glasses just to show off. She's like a thief? Everybody loves sexy clothing, right?

I think that you've got good, very light descriptions for characters. But you need to go a bit more in-depth. Like, what are their personalities? What are their ambitions in life? Are they polite/impolite/strong/weak/brash/light-hearted/humorous/outgoing/shy/sly? Give them a few more basic traits to flavour them up.

Also, what is their unique backstory? Perhaps you can create their past so that they have some kind of flaw in themselves they want to solve. For example, maybe Jack is insecure about his own identity. Maybe he can't match up to his father's mastery of magicianship, even though he's trying so hard. And that eats him up inside.

Or maybe explore why Zilch started stealing money. Perhaps she came from a very poor background so all she could do to survive was steal. Her parents left her, she had no home to call her own, until a band of thieves took her in. But perhaps she was betrayed by this band of thieves and lives a broken life now that is slowly being repaired etc. etc.

It doesn't have to be that exact backstory, but details like these can really give a character depth and make you care about them.

Keep it up!

Thank you for feedback.

Well, yes, Jack throw cards as weapons to hit the enemies. I haven't done much information about my cast, I posted what hell is done. In a war with Jack's father, enemies was won, the true violent enemies of everyone especially Jack's family. They were jealous why his father is a magician everyone respects Jack's father, One day the dark battle like I said before, with Jack's father. He finally died that day, enemies threw a party, and..

Violent words in spoiler beware!

For his father's soul sake.. Jack becomes their enemy and he tries his best to kill his enemies like they kill his father. Few months later, Jack's mother was died also, like before, Jack's enemies kill her. Jack don't have any money for food, so he becomes a teacher in a magic school with the help of what he learns from his father. He also plays magic tricks and peoples love it so they give money. He was respected, He becomes successful but he loses his parents..

What about Zilch? Like you said, Zilch was poor but expert, her father leaves her mother. Few years later, Zilch becomes younger, there was no other way so she becomes an expert money stealing theif. She got enough money for food and for hospital operation of her mother who was about 73 now.

Thanks for your time cashmere.

Just going to add that you should not have the character's hair color match his eye color unless everyone is like that or the color is black.  It creates an effect that makes the character seem more like an NPC.

Thanks for feedback.

I take a look at final concepts for Jack, but hair colour is final. But I appreciate if changing eye color's blue to black, works best?

Want your opinion on this new actor too.

Kea, a teacher in magic school, Kea and Jack lives together. Kea meets Jack in the first day of Jack. He was pretty new, so Kea explains him everything clearly.

Hair colour black, clothes brown, red cloak, red eyes. His weapon is Iron Axe.

But why they live together? Once upon a day..they was walking, suddenly Jack falls in a big hole where bear lives. In that case, Kea helps to give him his life back, he restored his health in his home, it was such a small village there was no doctor. So Jack decided to live together in a new home near their school where they teaches.

So they begin good friends. What is the background of Kea? His mother and father lives near at the Folcan, it is a big and rich town. He isn't poor at all, he goes for studies in Spade School, where Jack teaches together with him. By the way, he likes magic tricks but when he fails in final he loses his chance and interest. Now he is doing as a black smith in the village and Jack is still a teacher.

He is Jack.



Zilch.



Kea.