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  2. Okay, so, this took FOREVER for me to actually get something put up here.  Arg. 

    Some of the stuff I post here is going to be just writing, while there is also going to be art + writing.  Some of the art may actually make it's way into my game as title art. 

    The story parts of this thing is going to be based on my current Game In Progress, Unwritten: The Hollow BookHowever, to avoid spoilers, it's going to be an AU version of it, with certain plot things changed.  So.... Unwritten: The Hollow Book : Brotherhood.  There ya go. 

    And here we go with

    01: Introduction.

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    01. Introduction

    Where do stories begin?

                    Do stories begin when the princess is cursed?  When the little girl sets off for grandma's?  When the storm-tossed ship lands upon the mysterious island?  Or do stories begin with the events which drove the evil queen to cast her spell?  With the argument which caused the noble families to feud?  There is always something which happens before the wicked king is even born, before the magic ring was forged, before the sword was put into the stone.  The lights go on, the curtains rise, and the first actor takes a breath.  But when does the story begin? 

                    Does it begin when the parents of the hero meet?  Does it begin with the founding of the kingdom?  Does the story begin when a lot of strange, curious, arrogant creatures first emerged into the light and began asking how it all began?  Some scholars say the ultimate beginning happened when a big bunch of nothing blew up.  Traditionalists say it was when the gods formed the universe from an egg, a spoken word or the dismembered body parts of their parents. 

                    Whichever it is, flip ahead for ages upon ages, where a young man sits on a rock and utters the words, "Once upon a time..."  

    The children listened in rapt attention as he wove a tapestry of words.  Even Rose, who was twelve, and not a little kid anymore, gosh, was enchanted by the tale of young Eleanor.  Eleanor, an orphan, was forced into servitude by her sorceress stepmother and only wanted a moment's freedom at the grand ball. 

                    Duran was an excellent storyteller.  He had a good sense of dramatic timing and enough acting skill to give the characters their own voices.  And he loved telling stories, almost as much as reading them.  Of course, he also loved reading about history and science and cultures from around the world.  But stories, whether they were adventures, mysteries, tales of horror or romance, always held a special place in his heart. 

                    "When they were sure the chains were secure, the stepsisters returned upstairs," Duran said.  "Through bleary eyes, unable to move or cry out, Eleanor watched as her stepmother closed and locked the cellar door, taking the last of the light with her." 

                    "Then what happened?" little Daisy said, her green eyes wide.  "Did her fairy godmother come back?" 

                    "I bet the knight came back with a bunch of soldiers to save her," Elmer said. 

                    "As a matter of fact," Duran said, leaning forward.  He looked around.  "You'll have to wait until next time."  This met with cries of dismay, and Duran grinned.  "What can I say?  It's time you all got back home." 

                    Kelvan Brighthammer, the local blacksmith, strode up to the group.  "Duran's right, sprouts," he said in his deep, commanding voice.  "I know you all have chores to get back to, and I'm sure Duran does, too." 

                    The children grumbled as they got up, brushing dust and grass from their clothes.  "Thanks, Mister Brighthammer," Duran said, shaking the blacksmith's huge, rough hand.  Duran was actually a few inches taller, but the brawny villager radiated a sense of mass which always made one feel one was looking up to him. 

                    "No problem," Kelvan said.  "It's nice to get out of the forge for a while, even if it's just to make sure the sprouts get back to the village." 

                    "Tell Cordelia we missed her today," Duran said. 

                    "I will," he replied.  "Take care." 

                    "Goddess be with you." 

                    Duran watched the retreating figures make their way back down the road to the village.  It wasn't a very long trip, but the Sages had thought it best to keep some distance from the village and the outlying farms.  It wasn't out of any sense of religious seclusion, but rather out of practicality--the Sages often conducted magical experiments, and didn't want the innocent villagers to get hit with the fallout.  Usually the Sages went into the village to give the children their lessons, but sometimes--like when those lessons required Master Goshawk's complicated scientific equipment--it was far easier for the children to come to the Shrine.  They didn't mind, since it meant story time with Duran. 

                    Duran had been raised at the Shrine, which was dedicated to Libra, goddess of wisdom.  He'd been a ward of the Sages since he lost his parents when he was four.  Duran could hardly remember that time.  He was nineteen, now.  Almost six and a half feet tall and broad-shouldered, but still with the lean gangliness of youth.  He had bright blue eyes, grass-green hair and a light olive cast to his skin.  Though his coloring was unusual for the Kingdom of Ori, it was common in his original home, the island of Arcos.  He wished he had a chance to see his homeland again, but the island was another casualty of the war, sunk under the sea by the Warlock King's magic.  But the Shrine was home now.  At least he could read about it. 

                   Duran was about to check on his list of chores when he heard someone call out to him.  Master Goshawk was in the herb garden, waving to him.  Goshawk was a stoutish man of older-middle-age, with short brown hair shot with grey, and a bushy moustache.  "Duran, my boy," he said as Duran approached.  "Before you go anywhere, Madam Crane was looking for you."  Spotting his expression, he chuckled.  "Don't worry, my boy, it's nothing bad." 

                   Duran grinned sheepishly.  "Do you know what she wants?"

                   Goshawk shrugged and waved his hand, his brown robes fluttering.  "She'll have more information on that.  She should be inside the Shrine Sanctuary." 

                   Duran thanked Master Goshawk and headed towards the Sanctuary.  The Sanctuary was build of slabs of dun-colored stone, covered with carvings of birds, faeries and other spirits.  Like all the buildings of the Shrine, it was nestled amongst the rocky, cedar-strewn hillside.  The faint scent of incense drifted out from inside the Sanctuary as Duran approached.  The light inside was warm and bright, and Duran could clearly see Madam Crane standing in front of the altar. 

                   The Prime Sage of the Shrine was a small, elderly woman in pale grey robes, her white hair bound into braids which coiled around her head.  She turned and smiled as Duran approached, her round face a mass of pleasant wrinkles.  Though he'd never say so, she reminded Duran of one of those dolls carved from dried apples.  "Ah, there you are, Duran." 

                   Duran bowed.  "Madam Crane." 

                   "You've been a trainee here for many years," she said as he straightened.  Her expression changed a bit.  "You never felt pushed into service of the goddess, did you?" 

                   Duran blinked.  "No, of course not," he replied.  "I knew I wanted to be a Sage since before I came of Choosing age." 

                   Crane watched him for a moment, then nodded.  "You know the duty of the Sages, yes?" 

                   "To collect and preserve the knowledge of mankind," he said.  "We learn, we study, we teach.  We share the knowledge and stories with all, so that mankind may better itself and achieve the potential the Almighty placed within us." 

                   Crane smiled.  "Yes, indeed," she said.  "But there is another task.  Ages ago, the goddess herself gifted mankind with a book of great power.  No one knows what sort of book.  Some say it contained the entire history of the world, from its creation to its ultimate end.  Some say it was a grimoire of divine spells.  There are many stories and many theories, but no one knows for sure now, save the goddess herself and the Almighty." 

                   Duran frowned.  "What happened to the book?" 

                   "War broke out," she said.  "According to the stories, it was at least as bad as the war with the Warlock King.  The book was invested by the goddess with a sort of intelligence.  Knowing it was about to fall into the wrong hands, the book split itself apart, each part disguising itself and hiding across the globe.  The Sages have been searching for the goddess' lost book ever since." 

                   "That's amazing," Duran said, eyes wide.  "But I don't understand why you're telling me." 

                   "The Sages of the mother temple in Elala have found clues which point to the possibility that a part of the book is actually very nearby," she said. 

                   Duran gaped.  "What?  Well, where?" 

                   "The Old Palace ruins," Crane replied, "if the clues were interpreted correctly.  We wish to send you, Duran, to the ruins to collect the artifact and take it to the temple in Elala.  Do that, and you will recieve your full accreditation as a Sage." 

                   Duran stared for a moment, then his face broke out in a bright smile.  "That's amazing, Madam Crane!  Absolutely!  I--I'll go right away!"  He paused.  "Uh--what does it look like?" 

                   Madam Crane frowned at that.  "That, we don't know.  Only that you will know it when you see it." 

                   Duran wrinkled his nose.  "Better than nothing I suppose." 

                   That got a smirk out of Madam Crane.  "Very well.  Collect your supplies and go into the village.  We've arranged for you to be accompanied by a warrior during your journey, for protection."  Before he could protest, Crane held up a bony hand.  "I know Madam Tigermoth has trained you in self-defense, and you have a talent for air magic, but we want to cover all possible problems, yes?" 

                    "Well," Duran conceded, "I suppose better safe than sorry."

                   "Good to see you acting sensibly," Madam Crane said, patting him on the shoulder, though she almost had to stretch to do so. 

                   Duran collected supplies, put together by the other Sages, who wished him well and prayed Libra's blessings upon him as he walked down the road towards Hazelrock Village.
  3. Really nice writing! Even your introduction has an introduction, lol :D

    I love the "Rose, who was twelve, and not a little kid anymore, gosh," excellent characterisation.

    Great work! :)
  4. mostly useless said:
    Really nice writing! Even your introduction has an introduction, lol :D

    I love the "Rose, who was twelve, and not a little kid anymore, gosh," excellent characterisation.

    Great work! :)
    Haha, thanks, Most!  I'm glad you liked it!  Yeah, I thought that was a nice touch with Rose. 

    Fun fact: all the residents of Hazelrock Village have plant-y names except Kelvan and Cordelia.  Daisy, Rose, Elmer (okay, that's a stretch), Alder, Ash, Tulip, Mayor Hazel, and Cordy's late mother, Lady Orchid.  Oh--I tell a lie.  Mayor Hazel's sister, Rochelle, doesn't have a floral name. 
  5. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this.  Well written, nicely balanced prose which conveys a lot of information without shoving it down the reader's throat.  And topped off with a lovely image.  Congratulations on a flying start.


  6. 02. Complicated

    Duran reached down to give Cordelia a hand up.  She shifted the spear slung across her back and accepted his help, clamoring up onto the fallen stone with a grunt.  Duran barely held back a grunt himself.  Lugging books up and down the rocky hillsides surrounding the Shrine and Hazelrock Village had kept him fit and toned, but Cordelia was no flyweight. 

                    It still struck him as odd that Cordelia was there at all.  It wasn't that he minded; quite the opposite.  Cordelia Brighthammer had been his best friend for as long as he could remember.  When he was placed in the care of the Libran Sages, they took him around the nearby village and introduced him to everyone, especially the children, in the hopes it would make things a bit easier for him.  He knew they had been worried the local kids would maybe think he was weird or tease him for being an orphan, but so many had lost parents in the Warlock King's reign of terror, it was as if there was an unspoken understanding between the children. 

                    Cordelia, daughter of Kelvan the blacksmith had lost her mother.  In fact, her mother had ended the war.  A valiant Paladin warrior, known throughout the kingdom, Lady Orchid Brighthammer gave her life to deal the killing blow which put an end to the Warlock King and his plague of suffering.  When little Duran was introduced to little Cordelia, only a few months older than he, she'd handed him a broom and told him to look after her horse: she had to go slay a dragon. 

                    They were both nineteen, now, and the dirty-kneed little girl had grown into a dirty-kneed young woman.  She was very pretty, the whole village agreed, but to Duran, she was practically a sister.  There were traces of her father about her--something about the cheekbones and the forehead--but she mostly took after her mother: blonde, green-eyed, athletic and wholesomely pretty.  She'd also inherited her mother's Paladin abilities.  Athletic as she was, she was stronger and quicker than she should be, and Duran had once seen her unleash a burst of magical light in a panic when confronted by a slime outside the village. 

                    When wandering the village, looking for the warrior the Sages had asked to accompany him on his quest to recover the relic from the Old Palace, he ran into Cordelia.  Upon hearing about his quest, she'd grinned.  "Look no further, Book Boy."  She then explained this quest was a test for her, too, determining her readiness to undergo proper Paladin training.  And, before he could question this any further, she'd donned her custom-made armor, grabbed her spear and her own supplies, and hared off for the ruins. 

                    And now, a day later, here they were. 

                    The ruins known as the Old Palace were once known as the North Palace.  For centuries, it had been the seat of power in the kingdom of Ori.  Then, disaster struck.  According to accounts recorded by Libran Sages at the time, the Palace was brought down by an earthquake.  Much of the court and Palace servants had been killed, and the once beautiful Palace reduced to rubble.  Oddly enough, there was almost no damage at all at the farming village less than a mile away. 

                    "I'm don't know how we're expected to find anything here," Cordelia said.  "This heap has been here for what?  Three hundred years?  Why hasn't anyone else found this mystical doodad?" 

                    Duran had wondered the same thing.  Sages, scholars and thieves had scoured the ruins for centuries.  "Perhaps they weren't looking properly?  Madam Crane said the artifact is a piece of the goddess' book hiding itself.  Obviously, it's very good at hiding." 

                    Cordelia waved gauntleted hand.  "Hold up.  So, the only way we actually succeed in this quest is if we find this thing, right?  But if we can't find it, we don't know if it's because it isn't here, which means we won't find it, no matter what, or if it's because the bugger is hiding so well we can't find it, no matter what?  That right?" 

                    Duran grimaced.  "The Sages in the Great Library are pretty sure." 

                    "Oh, well, if they're pretty sure..." 

                    He sighed.  "We may as well look 'round as well as we can," he said.  "At least we can say we tried." 

                    "Ughhh," Cordelia groaned.  "Why can't I just punch some monsters?  Y'know, a nice string of rooms where I can beat up some slimy things, until we get to a big slimy thing  guarding a nice shiny box holding the treasure?" 

    "You know what?" Duran asked.  "Sometimes I hate you.  I really hate you." 

                    "You'll get over it," Cordelia said, bringing the point of her spear down into the underbelly of the dog-sized rat.  It shrieked and gurgled before falling limp and beginning to dissolve into ichor. 

                    "Ventus Rabias!" Duran cried.  A rush of air, threaded with ribbons of purple light, screamed forward, catching another rat and slamming it into the stone wall.  Cordelia seized the opportunity and dispatched it as she had the other.  Their dissolution into ichor was proof they were not natural or augmented rodents, but creatures born of magic.  Duran would have felt bad about dealing with real, living things so savagely, but monsters like these rats were dangerous creatures with no business in this Plane. 

                    The two of them stood back-to-back, ears straining as their eyes darted around the room, searching for signs of any more enemies.  They saw nothing but the disturbed dust of ages and heard only their own panting.  Eventually, they relaxed.  This had been another in a string of rubble-strewn chambers, wherein vicious monsters lurked--just as Cordelia had asked for. 

                    "It could've been worse," Cordelia said.  "We could--" 

                    "Just stop," Duran interrupted.  "I think we've tempted narrative fate enough today." 

                    Cordelia shrugged an armored shoulder.  "Whatever.  Come on, Book Boy." 

                    The pair picked their way across the debris, witchlamp held up to light their way.  They squeezed through another half-collapsed doorway, watching for any malevolent creatures.  All they saw, in the pale light of the witchlamp, was a small, cramped room, relatively devoid of rubble.  Dust covered everything and cobwebs clung to the corners, but the room was otherwise bare.  It was just a bare stone chamber, roughly the size of Duran's bedchamber at the Shrine. 

                    "Nothing here," Cordelia said.  "I guess we look for another chamber." 

                    Duran frowned at the map he'd sketched out as they'd explored.  "This can't be right," he said.

                    "What's that?" 

                    "We've explored every doorway we've encountered," he said, pointing to the lines on the parchment.  "See?  This shows where we've backtracked with every dead end.  And ever since we started this chain of rooms, there haven't been any more doors." 

                    "I guess I was right, then," she said, leaning against a wall.  "This place is a bust." 

                    Duran was about to concede the point, when he saw something near Cordelia's head.  "Hang on."  Cordelia turned to see what had grabbed his attention, and saw what looked like a word chiseled into the stone. 

                    "What does that say?" she asked. 

                    Duran rubbed at the dirt clogging up the grooves.  "F...Fi...  Ah--Fidelis," he said.  "It's Old Arcosan for 'faith.'"  He rubbed his chin, wheels turning in his mind. 

                    Cordelia raised an eyebrow.  "This helps us how?" 

                    Duran took the witchlamp and turned the crystal at the center, snuffing the light. 

                    "What did you do that for?"

                    "Just testing a theory," he said. 

                    "The theory that we'll wait in the dark for carnivorous beasties to eat us?" 

                    "Just wait." 

                    They waited in the darkness for something to happen, the only sound being the drumming of Cordelia's fingertips on the haft of her spear.  Slowly, so slowly as to almost be unnoticed, glowing lines began to appear on the walls. 

                    Cordelia blinked.  "What the...  How did you know this would happen." 

                    Duran grinned in the near-dark.  "Faith," he said.  "It was widely believed that Princess Olivia--who was a sorceress--was the source of the earthquake which destroyed the Palace.  I didn't know until recently that the Libran artifact was involved in this, but records show the kingdom was on the verge of civil war before the quake, but things stabilized afterwards." 

                    Cordelia frowned.  "Still not getting it." 

                    "The discord amongst the nobles started out of nowhere," Duran said.  "All of a sudden, people who were allies were at each other's throats.  Olivia must've tracked down the source of the problems and sealed it away.  She had the power, after all." 

                    "That's a pretty big leap." 

                    "A leap of faith," he said.  "Records also show Princess Olivia loved puzzles and riddles.  She was mad about them.  In fact, she was notorious for never doing anything in a simple or straightforward way.  Everything had a sort of sideways, convoluted logic to it when she got involved."

                    Cordelia wasn't convinced of his reasoning, but the ghostly images on the wall were real enough.  "Okay, so, now what?" 

                    The image on the wall seemed to be finished.  It looked like a diagram of some kind.  Duran reached out and touched it, and was surprised to see part of the diagram move over the surface of the stone with his fingertip.  He tried another area, and it moved as well, until it bumped into another portion of the image.  Another piece of the design stayed put when he touched it.  He toyed with a few more designs, and paused as two pieces came together to form a shape he recognized as the constellation of the Gryphon.  His grin widened as he continued to move glowing designs around, more clusters of lines coming together to form other constellations.  Cordelia could barely track the movement of his hands over the stone wall, they were so quick.  Eventually, though, she saw what he must've--a map of the stars, with lines and points and curves of light forming constellations. 

                    Duran finally slid the last image into place and stood back as the constellations of the night sky glowed from the wall before them.  There was a faint clicking, a grinding, and then the room trembled as the stones of the wall began to part.  The two of them watched in awe, hand shielding their eyes from falling dust, as a doorway revealed itself to them.

                    When the grinding and rumbling finally quieted, the pair turned to each other and grinned.  "Awesome," Cordelia said.  "Ridiculous, but awesome."

                    Duran picked up the witchlamp, relit the crystal and the two of them ventured into the dark corridor.
  7. 03.  Making History

    "Ventus Rabias!"

                    A burst of purple-lit wind caught the demoness' leathery wings, sending her spinning though the air.  She quickly righted herself and bared her fangs at him.  "You're not playing nice!" she shrieked. 

                    She dove towards Duran, talon-like fingers outstretched.  Duran tried to gather energy to fire off another blast of wind magic, but the demon was too quick.  He dove to the side, but the demon caught his shoulder with her claws.  He stumbled, interrupting his practiced fall, and he landed hard on his other shoulder. 

                    Cordelia pulled herself to her feet and grabbed for her spear.  The demon had caught her with a solid blow before, and if it hadn't been for Duran's interference, she would have done worse.  Cordelia might feel a little guilty later for bringing up the notion of a monster at the end of the tunnel guarding the treasure.  Right now, she was too busy being angry. 

                    Duran tried to push himself up off the floor, but one shoulder had been slashed pretty deeply, and the other might have been fractured.  He cried out in surprise and pain as he was flipped over onto his back.  the demoness straddled his waist, and she grinned wickedly over her ample green bosom.  "I haven't played with anyone in so long," she hissed.  "I think I'll keep you.  You‘re pretty." 

                    Cordelia lunged at her with her spear, shouting wordlessly.  The demoness turned, caught the head of Cordelia's spear and flung it to one side.  Cordelia turned with it, bringing her armored foot up in a kick which connected with the demoness' jaw.  The demoness was knocked off of Duran, who rolled away.  He managed to get his feet under him and began calling energy as Cordelia engaged the demoness in combat. 

                    The two of them were fighting much smarter, now.  Cordelia kept at a distance from the creature, lunging and slashing with her spear, while Duran blasted it with bursts of magical wind.  The trouble was, smart as they were playing things, the demoness was wearing them down.  Even Cordelia's superhuman stamina had its limits, and Duran could only muster so much magical energy at a time--and wind magic was even harder to summon underground. 

                    Deranged as she seemed, the demoness seemed to pick up on this.  Her attacks became bolder, fiercer, deliberately forcing Cordelia to tax her resources to keep up.  Cordelia continued to parry, thrust and slash with her spear, though she felt her limbs beginning to grow heavy.  She was a Paladin, like her mother, and the feeling of fatigue was unfamiliar and wholly unpleasant.  She could feel herself tiring, even her fury failing to fuel her. 

                    I'm sorry, Mom, she silently prayed.  I'm sorry it had to end like this, before it even began.  I wanted to make you proud

                    She continued to fight on as Duran's wind spells became less frequent and less intense.  She lunged and missed, and the demoness seized the spear and managed to yank it out of her hands.  Cordelia raised up her gauntleted fists, prepared to continue on unarmed. 

                    "Oh, goody," the demoness cooed, licking her full, green lips.  "I was worried you'd give up."  She lashed out, catching Cordelia with a backhand slap. 

                    Cordelia spat the blood from her mouth and grinned, teeth outlined in pink.  "Not a chance, babe." 

                    The demoness giggled gleefully and began lashing out at Cordelia.  She blocked when she could, but more blows landed than not.  Even through her armor, she felt the force of the monster's attacks.  Her own punches only landed occasionally, and then only glancingly.  Duran was on one knee, trembling as he tried to muster the energy for another magical attack.  She could run way--she could back off, leave Duran at the beast's mercy, maybe even just long enough to regain the strength to rescue him later.  But, no, she couldn't.  She might die here, but she couldn't back down, she couldn't just leave him, no matter what. 

                    Cordelia felt her body warm.  She thought her muscles were about to give out entirely, but the fatigue faded.  She found herself moving quicker with every second, dodging the demoness' strikes, each of her own blows connecting solidly.  The room seemed to be growing brighter, too, and she assumed Duran had managed to pull together the magical energy for a powerful spell. 

                    But it wasn't Duran.  Ragged purple threads of light drifted from his fingertips, the most energy he could summon as he panted on hands and knees, trying to keep from collapsing entirely.  He tried to blink away the dizziness and noticed the growing light in the chamber.  He looked up and saw that Cordelia herself was the source of the light.  A golden glow, strengthening by the moment, was emitting from her skin, flowing out from the gaps in her armor. 

                    The demoness noticed it, too.  She backed off, taking to the air with her leathery green wings.  All pretense of mad, lustful glee was gone, and she let out a feral growl from the back of her throat.  "No, I don't like it!" 

                    "Tough," Cordelia replied, though there was an echo to her voice as if she wasn't the only one speaking.  "You'll know when I'm through with you." 

                    Cordelia leapt forward, pummeling the monster with shining fists.  The demoness shrieked, flailing at Cordelia with talons wreathed in blue-black flames, battering at her with her wings.  Cordelia seized a wing in each hand and pulled.  There was a hideous shriek as the wings tore away from the demoness’ body.  More blue-black flames burned at the wounds as Cordelia tossed the wings to the cavern floor, where they twitched and writhed. 

                    “No more will you trouble mankind, spawn of the Abyss,” Cordelia intoned in her oddly echoing voice.  The demoness launched herself at Cordelia, who batted her back to the ground.  “The justice of the Divine shall be served.”  Cordelia held out a hand and gold-white light gathered, shaping itself into a spear.  She plunged the spear of light into the ample breast of the demoness, who shrieked like the tearing of metal.  Her entire body burst into golden flames, as she flailed and shrieked.  Even her wings ignited. 

                    In seconds, the flames went out.  There were no bones, no ashes, no stains of ichor.  The spear of light had entirely destroyed the infernal creature.  The spear faded and Cordelia--though she clearly wasn’t just Cordelia right now walked towards Duran. 

                    She knelt in front of him, and smiled.  Duran could smell sweet flowers and could almost make out the image of someone behind her.  Cordelia placed one hand on Duran’s head, the other just above the shoulder he believed was cracked.  “Divine mercy fall upon this good and faithful servant,” she murmured.  “Restore him that he may carry on the good work.” 

                    Warmth flowed over him.  The spell-sickness faded, as did the icy agony in his arm and shoulder.  In fact, it felt like the vague memories he had of being in his parents arms.  Cordelia sat down on the floor and the golden light faded.  Cordelia blinked, looking around like she’d just woken up. 

                    “Wow,” she breathed.  “That, uh...” 

                    “Yeah,” Duran coughed in agreement.  He stood, a little unsteadily, but it soon became apparent the effects of over-using his magic was gone, and as he flexed his arms and shoulders, the break and deep slashes were clearly mended.  He was still stiff and sore all over, but functional.  He held out a hand to Cordelia, helping her to her feet.  She seemed a little woozy, too, but there was a faint smile on her lips, and here eyes glittered with restrained tears. 

                    The two of them walked back to the end of the chamber, where they’d found the little box and encountered the demoness.  They could see it there, the glow of their witchlamp reflected over and over by the crystals embedded in the rocky surface of the chamber.  It was a small, shabby-looking box, not an ornate chest. 

                    “You earned it,” Duran said to Cordelia. 

                    Cordelia tentatively touched the box, tensing in case another guardian demon appeared to “play.”  She lifted the lid, and they looked inside. 

                    They weren’t sure what they expected; a ring, a gem, a crown.  They did not expect a small handmirror.  Cordelia picked it up gingerly.  It didn’t glow, it didn’t hum, it didn’t conjure forth foul spirits from outside reality.  She turned it over in her hands.  The glass was a bit foggy.  The frame had probably once been polished alabaster, but had dulled and yellowed with age.  It was smaller than the palm of her hand. 

                    “Huh,” she said after a while. 

                    “Yeah,” Duran agreed. 

                    “It’s, uh, kinda underwhelming, isn’t it?” 

                    “Well, I guess that was the point,” Duran said.  “It is in hiding, right?” 

                    “So...help me out,” Cordelia said.  “How do we know this is the thingy we’re looking for?” 

                    “Well, the evil monster guarding it could be a clue,” Duran ventured. 

                    “Sure, sure,” she conceded.  “Here, you look at it.” 

                    Duran took it from Cordelia’s gauntleted hand and immediately felt a humming warmth from it.  With it, he felt a sudden assurance in his bones.  “Okay, wow.  Yeah, this is it.” 

    The pair emerged into the light, having encountered nothing more than a lone slime on their climb to the surface.  They took a moment to just stand in the fading light of the sun, filling their lungs over and over with the sweet, fresh, mountain air, free of the stale scent of dust, dirt and decay. 

                    “Let’s set up camp,” Duran said digging out the supplies they’d hidden beneath the rubble of the Palace.  “Then we can head back in the morning.” 

                    “Good idea,” Cordelia said.  “I’m whacked.” 

    The pair of them laid in their sleeping bags, next to each other in one of the Palace chambers which remained aboveground.  It probably wouldn’t be considered appropriate for a young man and woman to be in such a position, but even if they weren’t too sore to get up to any funny business, they each considered the other to be practically a sibling.  Even when they stripped to their undergarments to tend to each other’s injuries, there had been no hormonal stirrings whatsoever. 

                    Duran looked over at Cordelia.  “So, what happened?”

                    Cordelia raised a questioning eyebrow.  “When?” 

                    “In the cave,” he said.  “With the demon--that light.  What was it?” 

                    Cordelia frowned.  After a moment, she said, “I think...it was my mom.” 

                    Duran blinked.  “Your mom?” 

                    “I can’t really explain it,” she said.  “But suddenly, she was there, giving me strength, guiding me, protecting me.  And I know it was her.” 

                    Duran remembered the faint image of a woman he’d seen in the glow, and the scent of flowers.  He believed her.  “I wish I could have met her.  You know, officially.” 

                    “Yeah,” Cordelia said, clearly beginning to drift off to sleep.  “Me, too.” 

    “Wings of the goddess,” Madam Crane breathed.  “This is simply amazing!” 

                    “Don’t sound too surprised,” Cordelia said.  “Book boy here had help.” 

                    “Yes, well, even so,” Crane said.  “Well, I’m glad to see you returning so soon and in such good health.  I had expected you to run into a bit of trouble.” 

                    Cordelia and Duran exchanged a glance.  “You can read all about it when I get back from Elala,” Duran said, deciding it was better to keep some things a secret for now.  “The quest isn’t over yet, after all.” 

                    “Oh, yes, of course,” Crane said.  “I expect a full report on everything for the archives.  It’s your choice if you wish to illuminate it or not.” 

                    Duran rolled his eyes.  “And you’re sure this is the Libran artifact?” 

                    “It certainly seems that way,” she said, turning over the mirror.  “There’s some kind of energy here within it.” 

                    “Cordelia couldn’t detect it, so it can’t be just regular magic,” Duran said.  “I figured you and I can sense it because it came from Libra.” 

                    “Quite possible,” Crane agreed.  “Quite possible.”  She placed the mirror in the little box and handed it back to Duran.  “You said you found some other artifacts there?” 

                    “Oh, yes,” Duran said, remembering some of the items he and Cordelia had picked up.  He dug in his pack.  “I’m pretty surprised they were still there after all this time, and in such good condition.”  He brought out a couple cloth-wrapped bundles and opened them on Madam Crane’s desk.  One was a dirt-encrusted knife, signs of decorative etching on the blade.  He pointed out the signs of which pointed to its age of less than a century, theorizing it had been dropped by a thief who‘d robbed a noble and used the ruins as a hideout.  The second bundle revealed some tools left behind by some scholars half a century ago when they‘d tried to explore the ruins. 

                    “But this--this one knocked me over,” he said, unwrapping the third bundle.  Inside was a book.  The binding was rotted away, the pages yellowed, the ink half-faded. 

                    Madam Crane put on a pair of white cloth gloves and took out a tool that looked like some kind of metal pincer.  Very, very gingerly, she turned the pages, scanning the writing, her blue eyes going wide.  She looked up at Duran and swallowed.  He beamed at her.  “This--this is the hand-written diary of Princess Olivia herself!” She looked like someone had just dropped a sack of gold coins in front of her with best regards.  She continued leafing through the pages, very carefully, though it was clear the elderly Sage was barely containing her enthusiasm. 

                    “This diary covers everything that happened in the months leading up to the destruction of the Palace,” she said, shaking her head in disbelief.  “This answers almost every question we have about that event.  Heavens above, this is simply marvelous!”  The Sage paused to read a passage from the journal.  As Duran had surmised, the Princess had indeed discovered the mirror—one of many gifts from the Alani ambassador—was indeed infecting the court with malicious magic.  Its discordant power had driven many nobles murderously insane, and a full civil war was inevitable.  “’It seems I shall have to do something drastic, or the entire kingdom will suffer,’” Madam Crane read.  She looked up at the pair of them, a look of beatific joy on her lined face.  “Simply marvelous,” she breathed. 

                    “Yeah, we thought you’d like it,” Cordelia said.  Duran smiled and rolled his eyes. 

                    “Well, Duran, I know you need to see your appointed quest through to the end, but as far as I’m concerned, you have earned the right to call yourself a Sage,” Crane said. 

                    Duran bowed his head, blushing furiously.  “Thank you, Madam Crane.  You honor me.” 

                    Madam Crane dismissed them to prepare for the next leg of the journey, with instructions to summon the other Sages so they could set to work restoring the Princess’ journal and transcribing it.  The Sages were all aflutter with the news of Duran’s find, and were eager to prepare copies of the journal for distribution to the other Libraries. 

                    As they all set to work, Madam Crane realized what it was which had been niggling at her:  What did Cordelia have to do with any of this?  And where was the warrior the Shrine had contracted to accompany Duran?
  8. Really engrossing, and I loved the digs at rpg cliches.

    My betting is on that mirror still being active, and reigniting discord.  After all, they can sense it's magic is still present.
  9. Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!

    I can't say too much without spoiling things, though. But stay tuned!
  10. 04.  Rivalry

    "Will you stop that?" 

                    Duran looked up.  "What?" 

                    "All that sighing," Cordelia replied. 

                    "Sorry," he said.  "I can't help it.  These figures are depressing." 

                    "So stop looking at them."  The pair were trudging down a road on the way south, towards Steelport.  Duran had a tiny notebook open, a pencil tucked behind his ear, and their coins strung on a length of leather cord.  Sadly, there was much more cord than coin. 

                    "I have to," Duran said.  "We're running out of money.  We shouldn't have stayed at that last inn." 

                    "Well, it was that or camping, and I can only take so much of that," she said.  "You didn't have to get a room.  You could've let me have one while you kipped down in the barn.  Like a gentleman.

                    "You know you'd punch me if I tried treating you like a lady," Duran said, closing his notebook and putting the money away.  "You can't have it both ways.  Besides, I got knocked around worse by that Bunyip than you.  It's moot, anyway.  If you plan on sleeping indoors again and eating fresh food, we're going to have to get working." 

                    Cordelia glared at him.  "What are you talking about?  We've been working nonstop for days!" 

                    "No," Duran said with forced patience.  "We've been walking nonstop for days.  Embarking on a holy quest to return a relic to a temple, exploring caverns and killing monsters does not earn one a steady paycheck." 

                    Cordelia kicked a stone aside.  "We have made some money from the monsters, at least." 

                    "Not really," Duran said.  "It isn't like slimes and giant bugs carry cash on them.  And most of what we earn from selling their stingers and fangs and whatnot to alchemists gets spent at the Healers' Shop." 

                    "So what do we suggest we do?" 

                    Duran pointed to a signpost.  "We're not far from Terendale.  It's a big market town.  We'll be able to get work there." 

                    Cordelia made a gesture with her head, neither a nod nor a shake--sort of a noncommittal bobble.

                    Duran arched an eyebrow.  "What?" 

                    "Well," she said carefully, "it's not like you really have a lot of job skills." 

                    Duran's eyebrows shot up.  "I beg your pardon?" 

                    Cordelia grimaced.  "Well, what do you at the Shrine all day?  Read and copy and organize books and scrolls.  There's really not a lot of call for a freelance bookworm." 

                    "Hm," Duran said.  "Yeah, it's not a complex and in-demand skill set like poking things with a sharp stick." 

                    Cordelia bridled, drawing herself up.  "Right!  You think you can do without me, crabgrass, you're welcome to try!" 

                    Duran bristled and scowled.  "That isn't what I meant, blondie, and you know it.  I have volumes of information at my disposal."  

                    Cordelia rolled her eyes.  "Yeah, but can you actually do anything?" 

                    Duran crossed his arms over his chest, looking down at his traveling companion.  "All right," he said.  "How about a wager, then?" 

                    "Uh, duh, Book Boy," Cordelia said, hands on hips.  "We don't have any money." 

                    "Not yet," he said.  "When we get to Terendale, we split up.  Whomever makes the most money decides how we spend it for the rest of the journey.  The loser can't spend any of the party funds, only what she--" 

                    "He--"

                    "--earns for herself." 

                    "Himself." 

                    Duran raised an eyebrow.  "Do we have a deal?" 

                    Cordelia mulled it over for a second.  "Okay, you got it." 

                    Before she could take his proffered hand, he pulled it away.  "And no impeding the other person.  Like crushing the other person's hand with Paladin strength like a big cheater-face." 

                    Cordelia rolled her eyes again.  "Sure."  They shook on it. 

    Duran bowed before the audience after the final noted had died.  Though storytelling was his medium of choice, but people were more willing to stop and listen to a song than a complete story--save for maybe Fridvallan opera, which could last for weeks.  But, he had learned a thing or two about music from the Sages at the Shrine, and he was fairly competent on the ocarina.  After a few reels and jigs there were at least 200 Crowns in various coins in his hat. 

                    Glowing from the results he'd gotten so far, he felt he'd earned himself a breather.  Sitting on the edge of the fountain where he'd been performing, he gathered the coins from the hat and began looping the leather cord through the holes in the coins. 

                    A shadow fell over him and he looked up.  A trio of men, two of which were very large, indeed, were standing over him.  "You're pretty good," the man in the center said. 

                    "Oh, well, thank you," Duran replied.  "I'm taking a short break, but if you're willing to stick around, I'd be glad to take requests." 

                    The man smiled.  It didn't reach his eyes.  "We haven't seen you around here before.  My name is Clefton Quaver, Master of the Terendale Bard's Guild.  These are my associates, Mister Rhymer and Professor Rondo." 

                    Duran nodded to the two men besides Quaver.  He noted that Mister Rhymer had the words TRAGEDY and COMEDY tattooed across his knuckles--there was a lot of room--and he rather doubted there was a cello in the case Professor Rondo carried.  "Lovely to meet you," Duran said, swallowing.  "Duran Alcharon. 

                    Quaver doffed his floppy velvet hat.  "Tell me, young Alcharon, which Guild did you come from?" 

                    Duran frowned.  "Guild?  Oh, no, I'm not with any guild.  No, I'm from the Libra Shrine, near Hazelrock." 

                    The man clucked his tongue.  "I see.  Well, unfortunately, there are rules here in Terendale regarding public performances.  If you aren't a member of the Bards' Guild, you need a license to perform in public venues."  He held out an official scroll which stated as such.  "May we see your license." 

                    Duran swallowed again.  "Ah.  You see, Master Quaver, I was unaware of such an ordinance." 

                    "Shame about that," Quaver said, expression doleful.  "Sad to see a young man prosecuted for ignorance of the law--and yet, there it is." 

                    "Regre'able," rumbled Rhymer. 

                    "Awrful," grunted Rondo. 

                    Duran's eyebrows went up.  "Prosecution?" 

                    "Indeed," Quaver said.  "That is the law."  He looked around and leaned forward conspiratorially.  "But you know, I'm an old softie," he confided.  "I don't want a lad like yourself getting nicked for something so petty.  So, as Master of the Guild, I can issue you a temporary license for the ordinary fee." 

                    "Well," Duran said, "I suppose I should take you up on your generous offer." 

                    "Good lad," Quaver said, beaming.  "But, you know, I am sort of taking a risk here, myself.  I think it only fair to receive a little compensation for such a risk." 

                    Duran glanced at Rhymer and Rondo.  "That would be fair, yes.  And how much would that total come to?" 

    Cordelia wiped the sweat from her brow, double checking the cart was secure.  The Carpenter's Guild had offered her a tidy sum to take a load of wood from the river dock to their Guildhall workshop.  Thanks to her Paladin strength, she was able to take the entire shipment across the town in less than half the time it would have taken a team of oxen to do so. 

                    She approached the Carpenter foreman, who checked to make sure the freight was delivered safe and secure.  The man smiled and counted out the coins into her hand.  "Thank you, sir," she said, smiling brightly, turning on the cute charm.  "It was a pleasure doing business with you.  If you have any other jobs for me, just let me know." 

                    "I'll keep you in mind," the foreman chuckled. 

                    Cordelia giggled and smiled, almost skipping away from the workshop.  When she got around the corner, she pumped her fists in the air and did a little dance.  "Ha!  If Duran is lucky, I might share my leftover steak with him." 

                    She was about to inquire with some of the other Guilds if they needed any heavy lifting done, when a man approached her and cleared his throat.  "Excuse me, young lady?  My name is Jersey, with the Carter & Laborer's Guild..." 

    Duran made sure the parcel was secure in his satchel as he stepped onto the roof from the fire stairs.  His musical career effectively over, he had decided to put his magical talents to use.  Reassured that there was no Messenger's Guild, he'd offered to deliver a few parcels for some of the merchants of the town. 

                    He closed his eyes and began chanting, threads of purple light weaving around his body.  The light sank into his skin as he reached the crescendo and intoned, "Ventas Servitas!"

                    He ran towards the edge of the roof and leapt off.  He should have plummeted onto the street below, but soared forwards, landing lightly on the opposite rooftop.  He kept running, never losing momentum, crossing the roof in a few bounds.  The feeling was exhilarating.  He leapt onto another rooftop, ran across, leapt, caught a lamppost, swung forward, tumbled across the top of a passing covered cart, sprung onto an awning and up to another rooftop.  On and on he flew through the town.   

                    The spell was winding down, so he allowed himself to skate across a clothesline and drop down onto flight of fire stairs.  The aura of purple light faded and he took a deep breath as he marched down the stairs and across the alley to the shop.  The owner checked the parcel to make sure everything had arrived intact, and gave Duran his half of the receipt. 

                    Duran went back up to the roof and took a few deep breaths, drawing in power for the trip back.  He might not be able to do this much more today, but at least the job paid well.  Again suffused with purple light, he took off across the rooftops of Terendale. 

                    Panting, he walked into his employer's establishment and handed over the receipt.  The merchant began counting out the fee, and paused.  He looked up at Duran.  "Ahem.  You forgot to have it signed." 

    Cordelia dropped the sack onto the desk.  "Here we are," she said, her singsong voice unable to mitigate the smell she'd brought in with her. "The east sewer is clear of toadrats.  Here are the tails for the bounty." 

                    The man from the city nodded.  "Excellent," he said, handing over the coins.  "So, what did you do with the rest of the toadrats?"

                    Cordelia frowned.  "The rest?" 

                    "Yeah, the rest," he said.  "The Alchemist's Guild are usually willing to pay about twice this much for a single toadrat hide, if it's pretty much intact." 

                    Cordelia felt her eye begin to twitch as she remembered the fury with which she'd wielded her spear, the devastation her light spells had wreaked on the monsters, and the fact that the monsters' carcasses had fallen back into the sewer and were washed down the drains to eventually emerge in the river. 

                    "Miss?  Is your eye alright?" 

    It was a good thing Duran was familiar with meditation.  It helped him detach himself from his current situation.  There weren't nearly as many establishments looking to hire in the short term as he'd expected.  He could have kept up the delivery business, but his magical reserves were all but tapped, and navigating the busy market town was much slower when one was on foot and unable to leap above any obstacles--especially when one is completely unfamiliar with the layout of the city. 

                    That left service positions, and only three restaurants were hiring.  One served Esparan cuisine, which consisted of shellfish and peppers, both of which he was highly allergic to.  The second was actually looking for someone to butcher livestock to order.  The mostly vegetarian diet of the Sages had meant he couldn't tell one cut of meat from another.  As for the third...

                    It was surprising to see such an establishment in a city like Terendale.  But then, these market towns saw a lot of people come through. 

                    There was live entertainment.  Which was unorthodox. 

                    As a waiter, he wore a uniform.  Which was not made for cold weather. 

                    There was an upside, though.  His tips were plentiful.  He wanted to believe it was because his excellent memory ensured the patrons in his section got exactly what they ordered.  However, he expected it was because his physically active lifestyle had rendered unimportant the fact he couldn't tie his bowtie straight--and the bowtie made up about a fourth of the uniform. 

                    He bused a table, stacking empty plates and glasses on his tray and tucked away the tip left for him.  It wasn't easy; the very short trousers didn't leave a lot of room for the coins--or anything, for that matter, he realized, fidgeting slightly as...things shifted.  He ran the tray of dishes back to the kitchen to be washed, and on the way out, nearly ran into one of the waitresses who served the other side of the restaurant. 

                    "I beg your pardon," he said, looking away. 

                    "No problem," she said, making sure, this time, nothing would escape her bustier. 

                    They both froze. 

                    Duran was the first to speak.  "Truce?" 

                    "Truce," Cordelia agreed. 

                    "And we never speak of this again?" 

                    "To no one."

                    "Not even under torture,"  she said. 

                    Duran nodded.  "It's a deal." 

                    "I'd shake on it, but, uh..." 

                    "Your hands are full," Duran said. 

                    "Right.  Well.  Back to work." 

                    Duran nodded.  "Back to work.  If you'll excuse me." 

                    Duran bent over to pick up the tray he'd dropped in their near-collision.  Making sure his notepad and pencil were tucked away in the pocket of his all-too-short apron, he looked up to see Cordelia quickly look away, hurrying about her business.  He was about to do the same, but paused to watch her leave through the other set of doors. 

                    Too make sure she was alright, of course. 

                    Ahem.
  11. This one is kind of long.  There was a lot of story that needed to happen before the next theme. 

    05.  Unbreakable

    Duran wished he'd been able to bring his watercolors, but settled for making pencil sketches.  Despite the frequent traffic the road saw, Dannanwood Forest remained dense and primal.  The forest was in a state of perpetual dusk, illuminated only by the occasional narrow shaft of light which managed to penetrate the thick canopy.  There was something strange about the forest, so different from the woodlands of the far north, and Duran itched to capture the image. 

                    Cordelia, however, was on high alert.  She was not enchanted by the emerald foliage, the feathery ferns coiling around the russet trunks or the song of invisible birds.  To her, this was a place where bandits and monsters had countless places to lurk and wait for prey.  Her pack was secured tightly to her armored back, and she kept her spear at the ready.  She was like a coiled snake, ready to strike. 

                    "Hey, Cordy?  I think there's a spider in your hair." 

                    Cordelia jumped and yelped, flailing at her own head.  Spear forgotten, she furiously ruffled red-gloved fingers through her blonde hair, emitting a sustained whimper. 

                    "My mistake," Duran said, holding something up.  "It was a dead leaf." 

                    Cordelia slunk to her knees, panting.  Duran watched in baffled amusement as she took a deep breath, bound her hair back with it's usual pink ribbon, and straightened as if nothing had happened.  She leveled a glare at him.  "Next time--" 

                    Duran held up a hand to cut her off.  "Wait a minute," he said, staring off into the depths of forest.  "Do you hear that?" 

                    Cordelia turned and strained her ears.  There--a very strange sound: a heavy, metallic noise; a solid pounding; wood breaking; cries of fear and pain. 

                    Almost simultaneously, the two of them bolted in the direction of the noise. 

    Luckily, the sheer mass of trees and the density of the canopy limited the undergrowth.  They were able to leave the path and sprint through the forest almost unimpeded.  It also made it easy to see the source of the noise. 

                    A large armored figure was thrashing through the forest, swinging huge, metal fists at something else who darted nimbly out of the way.  Small green lights buzzed around the periphery of the fight.  As Cordelia and Duran grew nearer, the smaller figure turned out to be a man, clad in what looked like green rags.  And the larger figure...

                    Duran slid to a stop when they reached the ring of destroyed trees and shrubs.  His blue eyes were wide and when he spoke, it came out almost as a whisper.  "A golem."

                    The thing was easily eight feet tall, humanoid in shape, very stoutly built, and--most unusually--it was made of iron

                    Duran couldn't believe it.  It was rare enough to see a golem.  As he understood it, the magical secrets of artificial animation had been lost to time.  They were also usually made of clay or stone.  An iron golem was almost unheard of.  It shouldn't have been possible

                    He paused to take in the rest of the scene.  The green lights were faeries--Wood Sprites, if he had to guess.  Duran had expected them to flee from the scene, but they seemed confused, entranced, unable to leave.  Duran then spotted more green lights locked behind caged chambers in the golem's body, their weak emerald glow in stark contrast to the scarlet light burning within the construct's eyes.  Duran felt a little sick.  To trap a Wood Sprite in a cage of iron was cruel, indeed. 

                    Cordelia had been glancing back and forth between the fight and Duran.  She didn't really know what the big metal thing was, but Duran obviously recognized it.  "The bad guy here?" she murmured. 

                    "The metal construct," he replied.  "I think.  It's trapping the faeries in iron, which is a bad thing.  But be careful--that thing won't go down easy." 

                    Cordelia nodded and vaulted into the fray.  Both the golem and its enemy paused when she appeared, but the man was faster to recover.  She leapt and jabbed at the golem's expressionless iron face with her spear.  There was a clank! and the spear glanced ineffectively to the side.  Before she could ready another strike, the thing batted her aside with a metal mitt.  She rolled and pulled herself up in a crouch.  "You weren't kidding," she growled. 

                    The man took advantage of the distraction to leap upon the golem and jab what looked like a bronze knife at the back of its neck.  The knife bent, and the golem flung its huge shoulders, knocking the man off of it.  He rolled and landed on all fours.  Duran could see now that the man was corded with sinewy muscle, his skin covered in streaks of brown and scarlet, only barely hidden by his ragged clothing.  He had a wild mop of brown hair, and his face was a smooth, blank expanse of bone-white, with only two dark holes where eyes should be. 

                    Duran shook off the man's--or was it a man?--disturbing appearance, and thought about what he should do.  He didn't know how long the faceless man had been battling the construct, but clearly a purely physical assault was pointless.  Even golems of clay were almost indestructible, let alone iron.  Duran began chanting, summoning wind magic.  "Ventus Rabias!" he snarled, thrusting forward the wooden staff in his hand.  A fierce blast of wind, streaked with purple light, burst forward and hammered into the golem.  Duran had aimed high, hoping to knock the thing off-balance. 

                    It rocked back, but it's huge iron feet were too stable, too firmly planted.  It soon righted itself and focused on Duran as a new target.  Duran yelped and ran as the golem's fist came down on a fallen log, smashing it to splinters. 

                    Cordelia soared towards the thing, using her spear as a pole-vault.  She landed on its back with enough force to drive it down to the ground.  She leapt away and joined Duran and the faceless man on the opposite side of the ravaged clearing. 

                    The golem pushed itself back to its feet and turned to face them, red eyes burning in its expressionless face.  Duran licked his lips, trying to think.  Duran's staff would probably shatter upon impact with the thing.  Cordelia's spear clearly did little better.  The faceless man had drawn another bronze knife, apparently not having learned from the first one.  What could they do?  As Duran tried to cudgel his brain, he became aware of a thick, sickly-sweet smell which had been drifting in the background, but he had ignored.  He could taste it in the back of his throat, and felt a little nauseated. 

                    Duran glanced at a nearby Sprite, hovering in the air, an expression of blank confusion on its tiny face.  Gears slowly slid into place in his mind.  He looked back to the golem as it lumbered towards them, and spotted faint threads of smoke curling up from its joints.  A memory slowly bubbled to the surface of his mind: Madam Tigermoth, an expert on botany, telling him how certain substances, when burned, produced a mind-fogging vapor. 

                    Hoping his hunch was correct, he said to the others, "Hold on to something." 

                    Duran planted his staff firmly on the ground and began chanting.  Ribbons of purple light coiled off his body.  His chanting intensified as the ribbons of light began swirling around the clearing, churning the air as they went.  The swirling vortex of air sped up.  Dust and dead leaves were blown up towards the canopy.  More leaves and branches fell down on them, followed by a large shaft of light as the column of air punched through the canopy.  The noisome perfume was undetectable now, and threads of smoke streamed away from the golem.  Cordelia, by virtue of her armor, was more stable in the wind than either of the males, and darted forward to keep the golem occupied. 

                    As Duran continued to chant, keeping the air clear of the mind-fogging fumes, the faceless man knelt, hands planted on the ground.  The Sprites stirred, their small heads beginning to clear.  One by one, they left the edges of the clearing. 

                    Some came to cling to the faceless man's ragged vest, while others braved the swirling winds to circle the golem, while keeping out of its reach.  Their emerald glow began to brighten, motes of green light sifting down to the ground.  From the corner of his eye, Duran saw similar coils of green light creeping from the faceless man's hands, pressed against the ground. 

                    "Knock it off-balance," a rough voice barked out over the sound of the wind.  It took a moment for Duran to realize it came from the faceless man. 

                    Cordelia dodged quickly to the side, getting in close enough for the golem to try taking a swing at her.  She rebounded from her dodge and jumped up, bringing her feet down hard on the golem's outstretched arm.  She was sent tumbling, but the golem over-balanced, too, and fell on it's metal face. 

                    The green light coming from the Sprites and the faceless man intensified, and green tendrils burst from the ground.  In the space of a heartbeat, the shoots swelled to the thickness of a man's wrist and lanced towards the golem like snakes.  As they grew, they arched over the fallen golem and sunk into the ground on the other side, forming a living cage. 

                    The golem pushed up against the huge vines, and they creaked painfully.  Some of the smaller ones snapped, and Cordelia could hear a faint sizzling sound.  Tiny sparks danced where the golem's iron body touched the vines.  But the Sprites refused to give up.  Aided--somehow--by the faceless man, more vines sprouted and joined the others, weaving around the golem.  It continued to wriggle within it's wooden cocoon, but clearly had no leverage. 

                    "Stop," rasped the faceless man to Duran. 

                    Though he was unsure, Duran ceased chanting and released the spell, dropping to his knees, panting.  The staff he'd purchased at Granny's Spell Shop in Terendale had helped to amplify his magic, but he'd still be feeling the effort in the morning.  The wind died down, and Cordelia--the nearest to the golem--sniffed for the narcotic vapor, and caught only the barest whiff of the nauseating perfume.  It was unpleasant, but she didn't feel disoriented as she had earlier. 

                    She stood and looked to Duran.  "What now?  It can't stay trapped here forever, can it?" 

                    Duran gave gentle shake of his head--which ached.  "Eventually the iron will erode the faerie magic enough for it to break free." 

                    "So that was the sizzling and sparking," she said. 

                    Duran nodded.  "Even if it didn't, it still has some Sprites trapped inside its body." 

                    Cordelia's mouth pressed into a line.  "How do we get them out?" 

                    Duran rubbed his forehead, trying to recall what he knew about golems.  He looked over to the faceless man and the Sprites who clung to him like kittens.  "Can you uncover its head?" 

                    The man met Duran's eyes with his empty black sockets.  After a moment, he began to hum, tracing glowing green spirals in the air with his fingertips.  The vines on one end of the wooden cocoon shivered and pulling away from the golem's face.  It stared out at them, bloody light burning in its expressionless eyes.  Threads of vapor coiled out from the openings as Duran knelt by its face, fanning the fumes away with his pocket notebook. 

                    Duran said something in a language unfamiliar to Cordelia, something liquid and glottal at the same time. 

                    The golem stared at him. 

                    Duran repeated the phrase, almost snarling. 

                    For a moment, it looked like the golem was going to ignore him.  Then, a fissure appeared around what would be the golem's skull.  The top of its head opened and red light spilled out.  Duran carefully reached in and removed a small cylinder.  As it left the golem's head, the red light faded, the lights in its eyes dimming to sullen red pinpricks. 

                    "What is that?" Cordelia asked. 

                    "The golem's khem," Duran replied.  "Everything that makes the golem who and what it is."  He unrolled the scroll and began scanning the symbols written on it.  After a moment, he blew a terse breath through his nose. 

                    "What?" 

                    "It used to be only priests were allowed to make golems," he said.  "The first things they would inscribe in the khem would be Divine laws.  Even before they wrote the scripts of movement they prohibited the golem from doing things like killing or allowing someone to die through inaction.  Then mages got hold of the secret and started making their own to their own rules." 

                    "And that's what happened here?" 

                    Duran nodded.  "Luckily, whomever this golem's creator was, they had very small, tight handwriting." 

                    Duran fished out a pen and a bottle of ink and began scribbling symbols on the scroll.  The faceless man and the other Sprites were clearly anxious for Duran to finish whatever he was doing.  A few times, he paused to read through the scroll and insert a few small symbols here and there.  Eventually, he blew out a sigh, rolled up the scroll, and dropped it back in the golem's head.  The red light reignited in the construct's eyes as its iron skull closed back up. 

                    Duran stood.  "Let him go," he said to the faceless man. 

                    A dozen eyes looked at him skeptically. 

                    "Either this worked and his captives are free, or it didn't and it breaks out later anyway to finish the rest of you off," Duran said.  "And I don't think you want those other Sprites to suffer any more." 

                    The faceless man and the Sprites shared a moment of silent discussion, then the Sprites scattered more green light-motes over the golem's wooden cocoon.  The vines writhed and slid away from the golem's body.  The golem remained on the ground. 

                    "Stand up for us," Duran said. 

                    Everyone watched in awe as the golem lurched to its feet. 

                    Duran covered his mouth with a handkerchief and urged the others to cover their faces, too.  "Release the Sprites," Duran told the golem.  "They are suffering." 

                    The golem held its iron arms out, and the small cages built into its body sprang open.  Some Sprites drifted drunkenly out, others simply tumbling to the ground.  The faceless man darted forward, scooping up the fallen Sprites, then leapt away, clearing still mistrusting the construct. 

                    "There's a drug burning in your body," Duran said through his handkerchief.  "It's very dangerous.  Please, smother it so no one else gets hurt." 

                    Another chamber opened, this one in the side of the side of the golem's torso, just big enough for its hand to fit into.  It reached inside and withdrew what looked like a gently smoldering pile of thick sludge.  Fumes rolled off of it, burning stronger now that it was in the open air.  The golem bent down, jammed its other hand straight into the ground, and scooped out a huge chunk of earth.  The golem tipped the sludge into the hole and placed the lump of earth back on top of it.  It stood, lifted a leg, and rammed its foot down on the spot, effectively sealing it. 

                    Duran brought the handkerchief away, tested the air and relaxed.  "Much better.  Thank you, Solomon," he said. 

                    Cordelia cocked an eyebrow.  "Solomon?" 

                    "An ancient Elalai king," Duran said.  "The golem is a new creature now.  He needs a new name for his new existence.  I managed to overwrite the scripts in his head, adding new directives.  There's bound to be some bugs in the system, but it'll have to do."  He turned to the faceless man.  "Some directives are still there.  But he won't go after the Sprites or anyone else.  His prime function is to protect them, now." 

                    The faceless man turned empty eyes to the golem, then back to Duran.  "Why?"

                    "I don't know why he was ordered to kidnap the Sprites," he said.  "His creator must've had a reason and will probably try again.  Faerie magic is obviously very limited against enemies like Solomon, but he could do a good job of neutralizing his own kind.  It isn't perfect, but..."  Duran shrugged. 

                    The faceless man seemed to think about this.  "Come with me," he rasped. 

    If Duran and Cordelia thought the iron golem was going to be the most astounding thing they'd seen today, they were sorely mistaken.  The faceless man, laden with Sprites, led them to a secluded thicket within the forest.  There were a pair of tall stones, each a bit taller than Duran and as thick as a fat man, leaning against each other.  The faceless man asked them to remove any iron or steel on their person.  They complied, storing their things within the body of Solomon, who'd followed them, having nothing else to do.  The man indicated for Solomon to stay, and the golem stood, infinitely patient.  The man beckoned, and Duran and Cordelia followed him, ducking under the arch. 

                    The arch had been free-standing, and Cordelia and Duran expected this to be some kind of ritual, but when they passed underneath the stones, they found themselves standing in what looked like a cathedral built from living trees. 

                    The healthier Sprites took off, vanishing among the branches and foliage.  Moss, ferns and flowers covered almost every surface, vines hanging like tapestries from the branches.  A small stream cascaded down from the upper reaches of the cathedral, spilling into a crystalline pool on the ground ahead of them.  And though no sunlight was visible, the entire place was suffused with a gentle, golden-green glow. 

                    Even watercolors wouldn't be enough for this. 

                    As Duran and Cordelia gawped at their new surroundings, the faceless man let out a bark, handing the more feeble Sprites over to a pair of oversized, bipedal raccoons.  Duran saw Cordelia watching with concern and explained the detrimental effect iron had on the Fae.  The faceless man returned to them and rasped, “They will be looked after.  Now we must prepare.” 

                    Duran and Cordelia exchanged a glance.  “For what?” she asked. 

                    The faceless man reached up to his blank visage, and they realized the faceless man…wasn’t

                    “To meet the Princess.”

                    It was a mask—enchanted, no doubt, but a mask, all the same.  It had melded seamlessly with the man’s flesh, somehow creating the illusion of an unfinished mannequin.  The Fae were truly the masters of illusion. 

                    Without the mask and the threat of metal monsters providing distraction, Duran could finally look the man over.  He was a good six inches shorter than Duran, putting him at just under six feet tall.  He also wasn’t quite so broad across the shoulders, but his frame was generously corded with layers of hard, compact muscle, his clothing hiding little.  The vest they had assumed was ragged was actually made to look like stitched-together leaves.  His loose green trousers were cinched about his narrow waist with a beaded belt, and a similar band was tied around his head, adorned with a red-and-white feather.  The face which had been hidden was much younger than his physique would have suggested—perhaps 18 or 19—and was more interesting than handsome.  There was something other about his features.  His nose and chin a bit too sharp, his cheekbones and brows a bit too arched.  His eyes were brown, and there were red streaks painted upon his face. 

                    A girl who looked to be carved from wood—a Dryad, Duran guessed—led Cordelia off to a chamber to freshen up.  Duran followed the not-faceless man to another chamber for the same purpose.  As they cleaned off the dust and dirt from the fight, tending to injuries with what looked like spider silk bandages, the man introduced himself as “Tiko.”  His voice was rough, but not nearly so hoarse as he had sounded with the mask.  Duran noticed that though the brown streaks—mud—washed away, the scarlet didn’t.  Tiko was covered in brilliant red tattoos which zigzagged across his body, like stylized tiger stripes.  He happened to see one on Tiko’s arm up close and saw that each stripe was actually made of minute whorls, knots and spirals. 

    Duran gave him the highlights of his and Cordelia’s quest, and as they rejoined Cordelia in the cathedral’s entryway, Tiko told them the Folk of the forest had taken him in as a child and raised him.  He led them up a flight of mossy stone steps to what could only be called a throne room.  Standing around the room like guards and courtiers—and they probably were—were a collection of creatures Duran could have only imagined: Dryads, Fauns and other fae beings Duran could barely identify.  There were dozens of animals, some outwardly normal, some overlarge, some walking about as humans would.  And seated in the center, on a living, blooming throne, was the Princess. 

    Princess Eora was probably the most human-looking of the Fae in the throne room.  At first, she appeared to be an exceptionally beautiful, very pale young woman, with knee-length emerald green hair.  Then, one noticed the point of the ears and her eyes, which were an emerald green, edge to edge, with no white and no pupil. 

                    The three of them told her what had happened in the forest, and of Solomon’s new condition.  “The scripts I wrote aren’t perfect, your majesty,” Duran said.  “But he won’t let anyone else take his khem, and he won’t let anyone be hurt in his presence—including the Folk.” 

                    Princess Eora thanked Duran and Cordelia and gave them her blessing by way of kissing them gently on the forehead.  She announced to the court that Solomon—though he was made of the Death Metal—would be treated with the respect a guardian of the forest deserves.  She then told a large wolf to begin making arrangements to deal with further threats.  Duran was a bit surprised at their acceptance of the iron giant, and oddly pleased.  Solomon had no real will or identity of his own, but now that he was a protector of the forest and not an intruder, Duran didn’t want the golem to be punished. 

                    Eora then surprised them again.  When she gave Duran and Cordelia leave to continue on their journey, unimpeded by the Folk, she asked that they take Tiko with them.  Tiko was stunned, afraid he’d done something to upset the Princess.  Eora placed her delicate hands on his brawny shoulders and reassured him he had done no such thing.  But he was a human, and needed to know the ways of his own people.  Merely watching them for signs of ill will as they traveled through the forest wasn’t enough. 

                    “As you learn from them,” she said in her liquid voice, “perhaps they, too can learn from you, and balance can be met between our worlds.”

    Duran and Cordelia waved to Solomon, who stood deep in the forest, watching them silently.  They turned to Tiko.  A bow and quiver of arrows were slung across his back, along with a satchel of traveling supplies.  “Are you ready?” Duran asked. 

                    Tiko stared at the road ahead and the thinning trees.  “I don’t know.” 

                    Cordelia smiled and punched him on the shoulder.  “Welcome to the club.”
  12. Very nicely done indeed.
  13. ksjp17 said:
    Very nicely done indeed.
    Thanks!"Rivalry" was tricky at first, because there really weren't enough characters for the typical "I'm a better swordsman than you" kind of thing, and romantic rivalry wasn't an issue, either. Then I remembered some of those sillier anime episodes when the characters need to make money and take odd jobs.

    "Unbreakable" went through a couple of rewrites as I tried to get the right length for the "episode" while getting in enough of the story. I wanted Tiko to show up sooner rather than later.
  14. Thought this would be a good theme to use to kinda introduce some other characters, forshadow events and do a little worldbuilding.  Worldbuilding, actually, happens to be an obsession of mine. 

    06. Obsession

    As the pages of the grand book of time turn, the eye of the story turns elsewhere.  The threads of narrative fate drift away from the towering trees of Dannanwood Forest, across the rolling farmlands of south Ori and over the Circle Sea.  There, a city stands, tall and proud, a queen among peasants. 

                    It is the City of Light. 

                    It is the City of Magic. 

                    It is the City of Galimond. 

                    A vast, sprawling city-state, Galimond glitters with all the magic of a faraway fairy-tale kingdom.  In Galimond, the colors are brighter, the smells are sweeter, and the music never ends.  Patrons sipping wine outside the open-air cafés are serenaded by minstrels playing the accordion or the violin.  Confectionary masterpieces are displayed in the windows of the patisseries.  Baskets of flowers hang from the lampposts, mixing their perfumes with the fragrances from the restaurants and boulangeries.  The roofs of the freshly painted buildings are tiled in vivid gold, azure, scarlet and green.  The people smile as they stroll down the cobbled streets. 

                    They daren't do otherwise. 

                    Galimond is, indeed a fairy-tale city.  And as such, there are Expectations.  Innkeepers are stout, pleasant and red-faced.  Bakers have bushy moustaches and are always covered in flour.  Toymakers whistle and tell stories to the local children.  And if anyone forgets how things are supposed to go, well...that's what Godmothers are for. 

                    Galimond has always been a gem of a city, but things changed twenty-five years ago.  As the Warlock King built his power, even Galimond lost its glitter.  The Patricien had died in a zombie attack, and the city council was doing its best to hold things together. 

                    Then, she came. 

                    Immediately after her arrival, the city began to improve.  The streets were swept clean of rubble and debris.  The buildings were reconstructed.  Bit by bit, day by day, far faster than anyone could have guessed, the city of Galimond was restored to her former glory.  And it was all thanks to Lady Oleandra LeBlanc, Fairy Godmother. 

                    But, of course, it would not be enough to simply rebuild the city, no.  No, it needed improving.  People just didn't know how they were supposed to live, that was the problem.  But she could remedy that.  She could save everyone.  And she will. 

                    Lady Oleandra crossed her plush, elegant room in the tallest tower of the Chateau to stand on her balcony.  She gazed out over the city--her city, the city, the city which was truly a queen among peasants.  Dusk was falling, and the lampposts of the streets below winked to life.  Oleandra's Galimond was the shining, shimmering city of light, the high city which faded into farmland and mountain vineyards. 

                    But there was another Galimond.  The low city.  A city of shadows.  This Galimond did not sparkle, did not shimmer.  It was not serenaded by minstrels outside cafes.  And it refused to meet Oleandra's Expectations. 

                    As Galimond sloped downward towards the bayous, the paint became less fresh, the colors less bright.  And somehow, out of nowhere, one found oneself in the other Galimond.  It was unpleasant, untidy, and the only thing stopping Oleandra from scrubbing it from the landscape was that it was necessary.  Someone had to work the factories.  Someone had to slaughter the animals for the Red-Faced and Thick-Necked Butchers to sell.  Someone had to collect the garbage, the night soil. 

                    And more importantly, someone had to serve as an example. 

                    Oleandra made no move to remove the blight of the low city, nor did she make any move to help it.  Among other things, that meant it had only the most rudimentary health care.  So many died of illnesses and injuries easily dealt with in the high city.   One such person was a young mother.  She hadn't been of good health--not many in the low city were--but then something settled in her lungs, and it was not long before her son was orphaned. 

                    André Duquesne, like many children of the low city, was forced to look after himself.  Like healthcare, child welfare was a neglected service in the low city.  He was too small for the docks, or even the garbage workers.  He was too afraid of the huge, noisy metal wheels of the factories.  But someone found him, curled up and crying from the hunger destroying him.  She was pretty.  She was kind.  She gave him good food, clean clothes and bed all to himself.  And she taught him a trade. 

                    It was one he put to good use over a decade later.  Most of the bourgeoisie in the high city assumed he was a Cheeky Urchin.  Most ignored him, some chased him off with a kick or a swing of their walking stick.  It took a long time to realize their purses were missing.  He could have kept himself in comfort--by low city standards--but he could never enjoy treating himself while other parentless children had no food or medicine.  So, though even the feel of a sack of gold coins in his hand filled him with joy and contentment, he kept only a fraction of his takings for himself. 

                    But André would not be merely surviving for long.  The other children would not be just surviving.  They woman who saved him, the woman in black, could save Galimond.  And, with his help, she will. 

    North of the Circle Sea, north of Galimond, north of Ori, north of everything, lay one of the world's most powerful nations.  The Borix Empire literally stood on top of the world.  Compared to many other lands, it is a young nation, and yet it was once poised to rule the entire Iron Continent.  Before the Dragon War, it did not even exist. 

                    Many of the northern lands had been ravaged when the Wyrmqueen declared war on humanity.  Yodelhägen was an alpine nation of merchants and artisans.  Urdgard's religious orders had severely restricted its magical strength.  Fridvalla was far behind in technology, lacking even rudimentary alchemy.  The vampire nobles of Blüdwald had kept themselves safe, mostly by using their human subjects/snacks as shields and emergency rations. 

                    The nation of Oshka, though, was mostly intact.  The Kezars of Oshka had encouraged technological innovation.  They had regulated magic use, but not restricted it.  They drilled their forces in strategy and tactics.  And the harsh, icy terrain kept the cold-blooded dragons sluggish.  The Kezar made an offer to his neighbors: sign their nations over, and enjoy the aid and protection Oshka had to offer.  They all accepted, some more readily than others. 

                    The Kezar was not a complete tyrant, though.  He allowed each nation to exist mostly as they had before, with the rulers acting as territorial governors.  But ultimate fealty was to the Kezar.  And thus, the Borix Empire was born.  Of course, the Dwarfs dwelling below Fridvalla had barely acknowledged the previous human king, and that didn't change when the surface of Fridvalla was subsumed into the Empire.  Nor did the vampires of Blüdwald change their behavior much.  They paid their taxes to the Empire and bowed to the Kezar--usually.  No one really bothered to correct them. 

                    But there was another force at work in the Empire.  At the northernmost point of the continent--and, indeed, the world--another ruler held power and would bow to no emperor, king or Kezar: Mavonie, the Winter Queen. 

                    While the other Fae rulers and aristocrats hid their little courts and kingdoms away on the edge of reality, Mavonie stayed very present in the human world.  After all, humans were far too much fun.  She even kept her doors open to those who braved the blistering, absolute cold of her kingdom to see her. 

                    In fact, one such man was dragging himself across the ice fields, pushing himself through the howling winds laced with razor-sharp ice crystals.  But he had too.  Even though he had long-since lost communication with his extremities, he had to keep going.  He had to see her, one more time. 

                    He'd been a child the first time.  His father had thrown him a birthday party.  It was also Midwinter's Eve.  That night, people would gather for the Midwinter's Eve party, but the day was for him.  He was seven.  The Warlock King had been vanquished, and the Empire was relaxing, learning how to be happy again.  Games were played, songs were sung, people were happy. 

                    He couldn't quite understand why the adults looked so nervous when the woman arrived.  She was beautiful.  Almost her entire being was a frosty white.  Her white gown sparkled like snow, even throwing off faint rainbows in the light.  Her lips were the color of frozen berries and her eyes were like amethysts.  And she seemed fun, too.  She strode right into the ballroom and flashed a dazzling smile. 

                    "Hello, darlings" she'd said to the room.  "I can't stay long.  Tomorrow is a big day for me, after all."  She laughed, a clear, bell-like sound that sent a shiver down his spine.  "I just wanted to stop by and wish the prince a happy birthday." 

                    She waltzed up to him and leaned over, showing a décolletage he wouldn't appreciate for a few years.  "Hello, Oskar," she'd said.  "My name's Mavonnie."   

                    Little Prince Oskar bowed like he'd been taught and said, "Good day, Lady Mavonnie.  Thank you for coming to my party." 

                    She smiled and chuckled.  "As if they could keep me away, sweetheart.  Now, hold out your hand, darling, and Mavonnie will give you your present." 

                    Oskar did, and she placed her hands over his.  They were cold, but he didn't mind.  When she drew her hands away, there was a small crystal bird in his palm.  It was cold, like ice, but it showed no sign of melting in his warm hand. 

                    "Keep this with you, and you'll never get lost," Mavonnie said.  She leaned forward and brushed her frosty lips against his forehead.  "You'll be wonderful, Oskar.  I know it." 

                    She stood and surveyed the room.  "Well, I'm sorry, darlings, but I have to go.  Things to do, you know."  She spun on her heel, snowflakes whirling in the wake of her gown.  She blew a kiss over her shoulder as she exited the ballroom before vanishing with laugh and swirl of snow. 

                    Oskar had kept the bird with him ever since.  He'd also kept the memory of that day, the memory of Mavonnie.  Since then, he'd learned who and what she was, and it had not deterred him one bit.  He had to see her again.  Nothing would stop him; not the cold, not the monsters of the ice fields--not even Captain Olanka Volkov, the Lioness of the North herself.  He had no doubt the highly decorated officer would be among those dispatched to retrieve him.  But he didn't care.  He had to see Mavonnie. 

    Far to the south of the frozen Empire, in Ori's eastern province, lies another sprawling city.  Wydsdon was noisy, soot-stained and crowded.  Even the wealthier neighborhoods were boisterous and sooty.  It was a city of opportunities, where the only thing separating the rich and poor was lots and lots of money. 

                    Somtimes, that money was spent at the Wydsdon Opera House.  It was a grand and elegant building--at least from the front.  Like most performance venues, the building was constructed first, then the architecture stuck onto its face later on.  Despite the Diopian columns and friezes adorning the front of the building, the rear wasn't all that different from the stage doors and loading docks found behind the dockside music halls. 

                    Reginald Twyrp, manager, and chairman of the Opera House's board of trustees, drummed his fingers as he reread the totals in the ledgers.  He did not like the number at the bottom.  It should have been bigger--much bigger. 

                    Twyrp stood, stretching the kinks from his back.  He decided to take a stroll around the Opera House.  The air inside the building would no doubt be fresher than the that on the fog-choked streets outside.  As he walked, he nodded to the Opera House staff: Mrs. Twiggins, carefully polishing the steps; Mr. Hoops, repairing a light fixture; and toting a large crate, no doubt for the Props Mistress, was Jet. 

                    Jet was a new hire.  He rarely spoke, and when he did, his very broken Orian and thick Xinlin accent made it tricky understanding what he said.  He was tall and quite sturdily built, but kept his head bowed, purple hair hanging in his red eyes, always giving off a sense of smallness.  It all sort of went together to create impression of intellectual simplicity.  Of course, Jet was a good worker.  He didn't seem to have any particular trades or skills, but he took orders well and worked hard at whatever task was appointed to him.  Usually, he was put to work as a general laborer, carrying things, helping with cleaning, or being an extra set of hands for Mr. Hoops.  In fact, with all the work he did all over the place, he probably knew the Opera House better than Twyrp. 

                    Most people knew about the stage and the seats and the lobby.  They knew about the backstage, in a nebulous sort of way.  The average person even assumed there were a few offices tucked away.  But the Opera House was like an anthill or a beehive.  There were countless chambers hidden away where people did the work necessary for an opera to happen.  Props, Scenery and Wardrobe each had their own workshops.  There was the studio where the dancers were put through their paces by the vinegar-faced choreographer.  The practice rooms for the singers.  The kitchens.  The dormitories.  The sprawling catacombs of storage. 

                    And that was just what Twyrp knew of. 

                    The reason people said, "The show must go on," was because there was so much effort and energy and determination poured into a single production, that if the show didn't go on, there was likely to be a catastrophic reaction reducing the Opera House and the surrounding area to a smoking crater. 

                    And aside from the myriad hallways, all these rooms were connected by a complex network of passageways and crawlspaces.  Twyrp had only ever seen a handful of them, and the staff were strangely reluctant about telling him where the others were.  Perhaps he could task Jet with mapping them out for him...

                    It wasn't just about curiosity, of course.  There were safety concerns.  If a fire started in one of them, it could spread through the building before anyone knew about it.  A thief or intruder could hide away in one of them.  Of course, anything that happened would only get blamed on the Spirit. 

                    Ah, yes, the Spirit. 

                    Like the secret network of the passageways, or the countless bizarre theatrical superstitions, the Spirit was something the staff was a trifle tightlipped about.  They way Twyrp heard it from the other trustees, stories of the Spirit were almost as old as the Opera House itself.  The Spirit was the ghost of a man murdered by a jealous soprano.  The Spirit was a director who loved his work so much he was entombed in the Opera House.  The Spirit was the remnant of a minor god whose shrine the Opera House was built over. 

                    What Twyrp knew for sure was that sometimes gifts would arrive for the performers from "The Spirit," and a private box was always left unsold for the Spirit.  Among all the ridiculous traditions of the Opera House, that one rankled Twyrp the most.  After all, a seat unsold was money unearned. 

                    Twyrp had eventually ended up in the auditorium.  He looked out over the seats, imagining them full of gaudily dressed patrons, eager to appear cultured and refined as they sat through a performance they barely understood, broken up by an intermission, during which they would overpay for mediocre champagne.  It was a favorite daydream of his.  On the stage, the principles of their current production--Roscoe's La Drivelata--were rehearsing.  The soprano playing Almondine was a new addition to the cast.  Twyrp saw how the voice master, Signor Libiamo, winced when she hit a particularly sharp note.  There had been talk of adjusting the part to fit her limited range, or even having someone sing her part for her as she mouthed the words.  Libiamo couldn't understand why Twyrp had hired her in the first place, but then the old voice master believed it was a person's talent and skill that mattered, not their appearance.  True, the young lady--Tristina, her name was--might only be able to carry a tune if it had wheels and a handle, but she was stunning, and would look amazing on the advertisements. 

                    Twyrp's attention drifted up to the boxes, and for a split-second, he could've sworn he saw a dim figure in the box normally reserved for the Spirit.  He wasn't sure what he saw, but he had the vague impression of a black cape and white mask.  Twyrp frowned and hurried out of the auditorium and up the stairs as fast as his desk-bound legs would let him. 

                    When he got to the upper levels, he adjusted his tie and tried to keep his panting under control. He looked into the box where he'd seen the...whatever, but saw no sign of anyone.  Frowning, he went back out into the hallway and stroked his goatee in thought.  He saw Jet walking down the hallway, carrying a roll of canvas. 

                    "I say, Jet!" he called, before the brawny young man disappeared. 

                    Jet paused and turned to not-quite look at Twyrp.  "Yes, Mistah Twyrp, sir?" he said, ducking his head in a quick bow. 

                    "Jet, was there anyone else up here?" Twyrp asked.  "In the boxes, or maybe just in the halls." 

                    Jet shook his head, purple hair waving.  "No, sir, Mistah Twyrp.  Do not see any person.  Only I, sir." 

                    "Very well," Twyrp replied, trying not to let his disappointment show--no sense upsetting the poor lad, after all.  "Thank you, Jet.  Carry on with your work.  You're doing very well." 

                    Jet ducked his head again.  "Thank you, Mistah Twyrp, sir."  With that, the brawny young man turned and hurried on his errand. 

                    Twyrp frowned, watching Jet go.  Vague, unspecified suspicions simmered in the recesses of his mind.  They weren't really suspicious of anything or anyone, but they were suspicious thoughts all the same.  Something funny was going on here, and he was determined to find out what. 

    Beyond the Opera House, past the foggy, sooty streets of Wydsdon and the noise of the docks, and far across the Wolf Sea was the small, emerald green kingdom of Mideran.

                    Mideran was not known as a powerful nation.  In fact, it was largely ignored.  The hazards of the Wolf Sea meant ships had to take an indirect route to and from the island.  Mideran never declared war on anyone, never tried to conquer anybody, and there were no neighboring countries with which to squabble over borders.  Any nations seeking to take over the island were quickly turned away by the witches and druids.  Aside from whiskey, its main exports were more ephemeral: beautiful poetry, stirring music, and energetic dancing. 

                    There wasn't much dancing tonight, though.  The wind off the sea cut through the air and made the trees seethe like uneasy spirits.  Mists still glued themselves to the boggy hillsides, churned by the winds, but going nowhere.  Up on a rocky cliff, mostly sheltered by a thicket of oak and ash and thorn trees, a little fire burned.  The faint silhouette of three figures could be discerned by someone daring enough to look.  Above the rustling of the trees, a voice like a rusty gate called out, "When shall we three meet again?" 

                    There was a brief pause while the other two consulted their planners. 

                    "I'm free on Sunday," one said. 

                    "No good," said the other.  "Dierdre O'Sullivan's twins are due Sunday.  It's her first pregnancy, so she's a bit upset." 

                    "I can't do the day afore," the first voice said.  "I'll have grandkids to look after." 

                    The second one sighed.  "I've O'Banyon's sheep to tend to the day after. 

                    The third voice asked, "Day after that?" 

                    The other two checked.  "Aye," said the first voice. 

                    "Works for me," said the second. 

                    "Good," said the third voice.  "It's settled.  I'll bring cakes." 

                    The other two smiled at that. 

                    If one had the nerve to approach the eldritch gathering and get a closer look, one would see a trio of women gathered around the small fire.  The tall, pointy hats they wore created long, jagged shadows.  All three had silver-white hair, scarlet eyes and fair skin.  There the similarities ended. 

                    The first speaker was a small, slightly shrunken, elderly woman.  A blue-grey shawl was wrapped around her bony shoulders, over her long, black dress.  A pair of spectacles hung on a beaded chain around her neck, and her hands deftly worked at her knitting, despite the swollen knuckles.  A stout pair of hobnail boots peeked out from under her skirts, idly kicking back and forth as she perched atop her camp chair. 

                    The third voice belonged to a somewhat younger woman.  Tall and apple-cheeked, her hair was pulled into a neat bun at the nape of her neck.  She sat straight up, as if her spine was made of iron, hands primly holding the cup of tea in her lap.  She wore a green cloak buttoned over her brown dress, and her shoes, peeking out from under her skirts, were neatly polished in defiance of the marshy terrain. 

                    The second speaker had been younger still, barely an adult.  Her silvery tresses fell free from underneath her pointy hat.  The sleeves of her purple gown were separate from the rest of the garment, baring her shoulders.  Her neckline plunged surprisingly low.  A long slit ran up her purple gown, showing the rose-colored petticoats beneath.  The heels of her boots were sharp and high, and a few inches of black stocking showed between the hem of her skirts and the top of her boots.  Overall, it was a look that made the second woman frown in disapproval and the first woman smile in fond reminiscence of youth. 

                    Their appearance, along with the three broomsticks propped up against each other, should be enough to identify the trio as witches.  Anyone hoping to see a coven of wanton women, dancing nude in the moonlight would be sorely disappointed--though old Gramma Quiddley was game for anything if her rheumatism wasn't acting up.  This same sorry onlooker might also be disappointed to see they weren't stirring a seething cauldron, chanting as they tipped in ingredients like eye of newt and powdered bat.  Of course, Dearie Finnegan did have a cow tongue and potatoes slow-roasting at home, but to each their own. 

                    Siobhan O'Carolan, the youngest witch of the coven, sometimes questioned the point of these little sabbats.  They didn't really perform any arcane rituals.  Gramma Quiddley had told her, though, that meeting like this was a ritual in itself.  It was important for witches to get together.  It wasn't easy being a healer, counselor, midwife, mortician, adjudicator and supernatural guardian all in one.  But that was the role of a witch. 

                    Siobhan stretched and stood.  "Are we callin' it a night, then?" 

                    "I think we'd better," Dearie Finnegan said, dousing the fire. 

                    Gramma tucked her knitting away, folded up her camp chair and gathered her things.  "Toodle-pip," she said to the other two, grabbing her broom. 

                    "Blessed be," Dearie replied. 

                    Gramma rolled her eyes, fixed on a pair of goggles and swung her leg over the broom.  She ran a few feet before kicking off and taking to the air.  The other two watched for a moment to make sure she had a clear takeoff before collecting their own brooms.  Dearie perched sidesaddle on her broom, gave Siobhan's outfit one more disapproving glance, and bid the girl farewell.  Siobhan shook her head and chuckled as Dearie drifted away.  She made sure the fire was dead and her things were secure before taking flight herself. 

                    Siobhan wasn't in a hurry, enjoying the feel of the wind streaming through her silvery tresses.  She was quite comfortable, despite the cool of the evening.  Perhaps her magic ran a little hotter than that of Gramma or Dearie.  In fact, she was so comfortable, she wasn't really paying attention.  As she passed over the castle, the wind gusted sharply, startling her out of her reverie and knocking her off-course.  Siobhan over-corrected, dodged a castle turret, and skidded to a halt before crashing into a stone wall. 

                    She paused for a moment, catching her breath and making sure everything was in one piece.  She was about to prepare for another takeoff, when a voice shouted, "You, there!" 

                    Siobhan paused and turned to see who had spoken.  Nobody addressed even a junior witch as "You, there."  Not twice, anyway.  Lily pads tended to feature heavily in the futures of those who tried it. 

                    The voice belonged to a woman.  Her dress was elegant and grand, full of ruches and bustles all manner of sartorial architecture.  Her hair was wound in a complicated pile atop her head and her thickly applied makeup made her look like a dyspeptic clown.  "Would that be me ye're addressin', madam?" 

                    "Obviously," the woman replied, gazing down her nose at Siobhan.  "What are you doing in my castle?  You don't look like a cleaner." 

                    Siobhan realized this must be the queen.  She knew there was a king, though she had no idea what his name was.  Witches tended not to take notice of who ruled the country, so long as they weren't tyrants.  After all, kings just ruled--it was the witches who ran things.  The family trees of royalty also tended not to branch much, which could explain why the woman couldn't tell a which when she stood in front of her with a broom and pointy hat. 

                    "Right ye are, ye'r majesty," Siobhan replied.  "Just a  passin' witch." 

                    The apparently-the-queen's eyes widened slightly.  "A witch?" 

                    "That's right, ye'r majesty," she said.  As an afterthought, she added, "Blessin's be upon this...castle." 

                    The must-be-the-queen scrutinized her a bit more.  "Why aren't you all green and warty and wrinkled?" 

                    Crikey.  Did wearing a crown compress the brain?  "Plenty o' leafy vegetables and fresh milk, ye'r majesty.  Drinkin' water instead o' wine.  Keeps the skin young." 

                    The queen's lips compressed slightly.  "Tell me--can you see the future?" 

                    Siobhan shrugged.  "Enough of it." 

                    The queen walked towards her, her gown rustling like a bag of dead leaves.  "I need to know.  You see my husband as king of Mideran?" 

                    Siobhan blinked.  "Well, yes, o' course I do." 

                    "Will it be a long reign?" 

                    Siobhan waved a hand.  "Well, as long as humanly possible," she replied.  "No one lives forever, ye know." 

                    The queen raised an eyebrow.  "Is someone going to kill him?" 

                    Oh, dear.  Of course, Siobhan knew this sort of thing happened to royalty.  But clearly the woman was worried about her husband.  "No man born shall end ye'r husband's life, ye're majesty.  And don't worry.  He'll be on the throne till the forest comes to tea," she said, recalling an old expression her grandfather used to use.  "Now, ye just get ye'rself a good night's rest, an' don't ye worry about a thing, allright?" 

                    The queen regarded herself for a moment, then nodded before swishing off towards the stairs.  She paused before descending, and turned back towards Siobhan.  "Any other words of wisdom." 

                    Siobhan thought for a moment.  "It's always a good idea to wash ye'r hands," she said.  "Good night, ye'r majesty."  Before the evening could get any stranger, she kicked off and took to the skies.  She really had no idea why the queen was so upset, but the soothsaying seemed to make her feel better.  And who knew?  Maybe some of it would come true. 

                    The woman watched the witch vanish into the night.  Witches had the power of prophecy, everybody knew.  And she'd kept addressing her as "your majesty."  That meant all her plans would come to fruition.  This knowledge lighting a flame in her soul, she hurried through the castle corridors as quick as she was able, until she reached her husband's bedchamber. 

                    "Aidan," she said.  "Is everything ready?" 

                    The man nodded, expression grim. 

                    "Tonight, we do it," she said, eyes glittering.  "We shall not fail.  Tonight, we kill the king, and the throne will at last be ours." 

    And now the eye of fate drifts south, away from the moors of Mideran, away from the ice fields of the Borix Empire, away from the verdant hills of Ori, past the Circle Sea, past even the island of Elala and the Grand Library.  It settles on the other side of the ocean, onto the Crystal Continent. 

                    Like an island amid the sea of sand and stone which makes up much of the Crystal Continent, stands the kingdom of Alana.  Rain being more precious than gems in Alana, the cities and villages of this nation follow the rivers and oases.  No town is built to the square, the way they are in verdant Ori.  The streets of even the Theopolis, the grand temple city, meander and divide and reconverge at odd angles. 

                    If Baad hadn’t been a native of the Theopolis, it would have been quite difficult to follow the girl. 

                    Baad didn’t know why Torus wanted the Amoran Priestess followed, and he certainly wasn’t going to ask.  Those who asked too many questions of the High Priest found themselves given very strict lessons on faith. 

                    The Priestess didn’t go anywhere all that interesting, but Baad took notes anyway.  When it looked like she was finished with her outing, Baad hurried to the Theopolis to meet with Torus. 

                    Baad found the High Priest performing the Full Dark Prayer.  There were nearly a dozen daily prayers the High Priest went through, every day.   His entire existence revolved around the careful orchestration of rituals, ensuring nothing deviated from the schedule.  Baad waited until Torus stood from the altar, and coughed politely. 

                    Torus regarded him with stone-grey eyes and inclined his head.  Baad approached with a bowed head and knelt before the High Priest.  “I have done as you have asked, Exalted One.” 

                    “Tell me what you observed,” Torus replied, his voice deep and resonant as a funeral bell.

                    “The Priestess seemed to be on a stroll of the city, walking more for enjoyment than for a purpose,” Baad said.  “She visited the market place, but only bought a few spools of colored threads.  She ate a small meal of fruit and water near the Olive Grove, watching the musicians performing there.  She gave them a few argit and wandered further into the city proper, out of the Theopolis.” 

                    “She left the Theopolis?” Torus asked. 

                    Baad nodded.  “Yes, Exalted One.  Not far, though.  She just seemed to watch the ships at the harbor for a while.  Then she returned towards the Theopolis and the Temple of Amora.” 

                    “And nothing else happened?” 

                    Baad thought.  “Ah!  Yes!  She did actually venture near the docks.  A sailor had injured himself and she rushed to his aid, using her magic.  If she had not intervened, the man may have actually lost an arm.” 

                    “Thank the heavens, then, that the Priestess was there to help one of our brave sailors.” 

                    “Oh, no, the sailor was from Xinlin,” Baad said. 

                    Torus was silent, and Baad thought he had displeased the High Priest.  He swallowed hard, bracing himself for punishment, when Torus said, “thank you.  You may go.” 

                    Baad blinked up at him, and hurried away, thankful for the reprieve. 

                    In the sanctuary, alone with the icons of his gods, Torus leaned on the altar and blew a slow breath from his nose.  This Priestess was getting to be troublesome.  She already had eschewed the full-body robes and shrouds priestesses had worn for centuries, and walked about in normal clothing.  She went into the hospitals, using her healing powers on whomever needed it the most, no matter if they were foreigners or had performed the ritual of cleanliness or not.  She sang and danced with the street musicians, who played all sorts of modern or foreign rubbish.  These were just the beginnings of her deviatons from tradition. 

                    Well, soon it would be no more. 

                    As soon as that mad Zemphisian architect was finished, nothing would deviate from the proper and true traditions again.
  15. 07. Eternity

    Torus limped down the hallway, leaning on his staff.  No one knew how old the High Priest was, but no one in the Theopolis could remember a time when he wasn't the religious leader of Alana.  To look at him, his age was anywhere between fifty and five hundred.  His face looked like it was carved from a hillside; there weren't many sags or wrinkles, but what lines were there looked like they'd been chiseled in.  His eyes were a pale slate green.  His head was shaved marble-smooth, but his eyebrows were so dark a blue as to nearly be black.  His brown skin had a slightly grey cast to it, as if he was forever under a cloudy sky. 

                    The High Priest didn't care for the hallway.  Even ignoring its lack of religious iconography, this corridor was known only to Torus.  He was the only one who used it, and very rarely at that.  Torus' passage could normally be tracked by the grooves worn in the stone floors.  For countless years, he'd been walking the same corridors at the same time, performing the same rituals. 

                    But needs must. 

                    He couldn't house the architect anywhere out in the open.  People would ask questions.  That would only mean more messes to tend to. 

                    Torus had known what would need to be done for some time now.  The trouble was, he lacked the requisite knowledge in the godless arts called "mathematics" and "engineering."  Luckily, one of his agents had told him of a man in Zemphis whose genius in such fields was incandescent.  The architect's last project was a pyramid which had to be demolished before it opened a rift in space. 

                    But it wasn't a pyramid Torus wanted.  Heaven only knew why the Zemphisians were so obsessed with the things.  Their entire misbegotten culture centered around interring their dead beneath them.  Indeed, it wasn't a building at all the High Priest had commissioned. 

                    Torus flicked the last hidden switch and the wall slid open to reveal the chamber housing the architect.  Keth Idra Thessiphet didn't even look up as the High Priest entered the chamber.  The architect was carefully shaping a plane of glass, its exact purpose unknown and uninteresting to Torus. 

                    Torus approached the artisan.  "How much longer until the project reaches completion?" 

                    "There are only a few more components to construct," Thessiphet said distractedly.  "It is delicate work, if you want it to fit the exact requirements." 

                    Torus nodded.  He wanted the project completed soon, but he wanted it done right.  He limped towards the construct on the other side of the workroom.  He held a bony hand out towards the thing, but did not allow himself to touch it.  He could practically feel the power radiating from it.  He had no idea exactly how the various components fit together, but in his mind he could see the end result. 

                    And it was glorious. 

                    "Take all the time you need," the High Priest said.  "We'll soon have time to spare." 

    Mira frowned, her sea-green eyes scanning the crowd.  For days now, the sense that someone had been following her had been growing.  She hoped she wasn't coming down with some kind of madness.  Shaking her head with a jangle of jewelry, she continued her stroll through the Theopolis.  She smiled, seeing the new temples being built here.  The scriptures of the Divine were known throughout most of the world, and most peoples knew of and worshipped many of the same gods. 

                    Amora, goddess of mercy, to whom Mira had dedicated herself, was one such goddess.  She had temples in Xinlin, Dharia, even as far as the Borix Empire.  But the temple where Mira served as Priestess of Amora was considered the spiritual home of the Amoran faith.  Rain was so rare and precious in Alana that many of the services Mira conducted centered on beseeching Amora to send the rains and keep Alana fresh and fertile. 

                    There had also been temples in the Theopolis to Galvas the Just, Novan the Cunning and Libra the Wise.  Amid these were temples and shrines to various smaller gods: patron deities of the weavers, the blacksmiths and other crafts; gods of the desert, the wind, the sea and the field.  And, of course, the whole Theopolis was dominated by the High Temple of the Divine, who created the entire world and the gods who watched over it.  The Temple of the Divine, was, of course, presided over by Torus, the High Priest. 

                    Mira didn't really like the High Priest.  He never smiled and he didn't blink much.  She also got the distinct impression he didn't like her, either.  She'd never asked the other Sisters of Amora if he was like that to all the Priestesses, but it almost seemed personal.  She couldn't think why.  She was kind to everyone.  She was often in the hospitals, using her water magic to heal those who needed it most.  She went out into the city to talk to the people, spreading the good word of Amora and the Divine by interacting personally with people.  She even left aside the ceremonial shrouds and robes traditionally worn by Priestesses, choosing instead to wear normal clothing.  Why bother with the fancy stuff?  Things were changing in the Theopolis, and it was, in part, due to her efforts. 

                    Mira was observing the construction being done on a new temple.  Judging by the statuary, she thought it must be to Varana, goddess of love.  It actually sort of surprised her.  Many Varanite cults had a reputation of unseemly behavior, and Mira expected Torus to flatly refuse any such goings-on in the Theopolis.  Of course, those cults--if they existed--were a miniscule minority of Varana's followers.  Most were as charity-oriented as the Sisterhood of Amora.  Mira had been spending much of her free time at the Library, learning about other cultures, science and history--things she didn't learn from the Sisterhood. 

                    She had learned a lot from the Sages and their Library.  Some of it was making her question many of the things she had been taught since arriving at the Theopolis as a child.  The core of her faith remained.  She still believed in the Divine and in Amora.  But there were so many things becoming evident which conflicted with the doctrine of her childhood.  How could one really tell the difference between what was inspired by the Divine and what was written by the hand of man? 

                    She'd considered going to the High Priest for answers, but decided against it.  It wasn't just the discomfort she felt around him, the distaste which radiated from him, but there was something else.  She'd watched him.  The man was like one of those clocks from Yodelhägen she'd seen in the bazaar.  Every hour, little wooden people would come out of little doors, moving on little tracks.  They would bow to each other and ring little bells, then go back into their little doors.  Every hour, every day, the same thing, as long as the gears were functional.

                    Torus was much the same way.  If every and calendar in the kingdom vanished, everyone could still keep in time by Torus' movements.  And though he never missed a prayer or a service, she noticed he wasn't always where he normally was between times.  She'd seen him in places she'd never seen him in.  Maybe he was just growing as a person after all these years, finally deviating from the routine of decades.  But something about the look in his eye put that notion to an end.  She wondered if she was fretting over nothing, but something kept niggling at the back of her mind.  Something was wrong, and asking Torus would only make things worse. 

                    Instead, she'd gone to the Sisters with her spiritual questions.  She'd asked the Sages, the Priests of Galvas, and the other leaders of the Theopolis.  They'd all given her variations of the same answer: pray, and trust in the Divine, and the truth will find you. 

                    She wondered if Torus had found out about her questions and disapproved of those, too. 

                    She was about to turn around and head back to the temple for the evening, when she heard someone cry out.  She cast about, earrings jangling, and pinned down the sound.  She dashed down an alleyway and found a man being set upon by bandits. 

                    Mira ran towards the scene and cries out for them to stop.  "Leave him alone," she said.  "Just go on your way and I won't alert the guardsmen!" 

                    The bandits glared at her and disappeared down the alley.  Mira relaxed and walked up to their victim.  "They're gone," she said, holding out her hand and smiling.  "You're safe now." 

                    The man smiled up at her and took her hand.  He got to his feet, still holding her hand.  "Thank you, Priestess," he said.  "You are a blessing." 

                    Feeling warmth spread through her heart.  "As are you, friend," she said.  "Did they hurt you at all?" 

                    The man shook his head.  "Nothing that would hinder me," he said. 

                    Mira cocked her head to one side.  "Hinder you?" 

                    "Hinder me from doing this," he said, and jerked her arm towards him.  She cried out in surprise, stumbling into him.  He locked his arm around her neck, holding her as she struggled.  "If you won't be quiet," he said, "I'll make you quiet." 

                    He brought up a cloth, and Mira knew it would be soaked in some foul substance to render her unconscious.  Eyes wide and heart pounding, she cried out, "Maya!"  The air around her flashed blue, and a surge of water burst out from her. 

                    Mira's attacker was thrown back by the water's force.  Drenched head to toe herself, she stumbled away from the treacherous bandit.  She turned towards him as she backed away.  He was coughing water from his lungs, climbing back to his feet.  "Just stop it," she said, trying to keep her breathing under control.  Was everyone at evening prayers?  Why hadn't anyone come to help her?  "Just go away!" 

                    The man pulled a dagger from his sodden tunic, and over his shoulder, Mira could see one of the other bandits approaching, also wielding a dagger.  Neither showed any interest in leaving her alone, so she held up her hands in front of her chest, palms apart and facing each other.  She focused, and a circle of blue light appeared between them.  She cried out, "Maya Kora!" and a sphere of glowing water shot out from the circle of light.  It struck the first bandit square in the chest, bursting into a shower of glittering droplets and bowling the bandit over to the ground.  Another sphere shot forward, towards the other bandit.  He dodged, and it shattered a crate behind him in a burst of splinters and water drops. 

                    A shower of dust alerted her to a presence above her, and she quickly backpedaled, barely missing being pounced upon by the third bandit.  Once again, she conjured the circle of light and fired off a series of water-orbs at her assailants.  Most missed, one only catching a bandit in the shoulder, but they were enough to slow them down as the bandits dodged. 

                     She spun on her heel and ran full tilt down the road, leading out of the Theopolis.  She knew it was silly to run away from the center of the city, where she would be safest, but right now she was more concerned with just running away.  She kept running and running, not knowing if the bandits were closing in, or even if they were still chasing her.  She certainly wasn't going to stop and look.

                    She heard people gasp and murmur as she ran past, towards the Theopolis gates.  She was finally among other people, which meant she could slow down.  Guards could be called.  But something pushed her onwards.  Something told her it was vitally important for her to run all the way to the gates. 

                    The city gates loomed ahead, drawing nearer with every second.  Her sandaled foot crossed the threshold---

                    And everything stopped. 

                    The sudden silence was a near-physical force of its own.  The coppery brightness of the desert sky instantly switched to a deep purple-black. 

                    Nothing moved. 

                    Nothing breathed. 

                    In Alana's City of Gods, Time was dead.