Art made by me.

Feel free to give some feedbacks. (They are always appriciated)

That is pretty awesome. If I have to nitpick... I will...

She could do with a belt or something, the shift between naked skin and pants is a bit plain and simple as is.
The collar sticking through her hair .... doesnt look good, it's weird. Hair don't fall like that
Upper arms look a bit to thin compared to the lower arms
One of her eyes looks bigger (but this could be a trick of the mind due to the hair falling over it)
The pose is rather static and without life (but I take it this is just the concept-pose)
She needs shoes or at least a anckle-bracelet or something to break it up down there

Other then that awesome work!

Thanks, i have not decided on the shoes yet. So the hair is bad, mmm. and upper arms, thanks. The pose is just concept, I have already moving poses for her.

The hair isn't bad, just the way it falls over her collar at her right side (viewers left) is unnatural.

I think she's cute--but then again... I like blondes.

:kaoluv:

Ok, Finnuval, how about this?

Much much better :D

one thing left : Still something with her eye... don't know what exactly but it's a bit off... Cant zoom in enough but I think her right eye is a tiny bit higher then her left.

Other then that. Great work!

Alright, here is a close up. I think they are equally big, but see if you can see what you feel is out of order.

Thanks for the zoom that helped a lot!
They are equally big but ... off-center!
Her head is straight but if you draw a line between the eyse the don't line up...


See... :D
and her head is not tilted enough to explain this away

I'd let her slay my dragon.

Hmm, the head was tiled, I tilted it to base. I am not sure I can see it. Perhaps it was the angle.

Yes it was tilted but if a human tilts their head the eyes re-position and the pupil does not stay in the exact same position (hard to explain haha) but this solves it :)

lol, good. Well, I guess that was it then. Thanks for the feed back. I will ask for feedback when the knight shows up (Also a female) The males will show up later, thanks for the feed back. I plan to create graphics for IG Maker and other platform engines and perhaps for MV too (Characters for high fantasy)

Well if I say I'll nitpick I will nitpick haha
If you want you can always PM for feedback (I'll probably respond quicker that way) Glad to be off help :)

I also want to show others my art, so others can give feedback. However, thanks for the offer.

Yeah I understand but just in case you want mine specificly you can ask directly, just so you know ;)

Keep up the good work!

a forest map I made a while for IG maker and other platform makers. Freel free to give feedbacks.

Hello again :D

Look good! This time I have little to comment on haha
1) The closest rock on the left could be placed a bit more in the tall grass.
2) The background could be a bit more dark/saturated in color the further away it gets
3) The large tree on the right could be moved a bit closer.

That's all and just my opinnion :)

Cool, I will think of next time. I will look forward to see you draw a map with these tiles. You seem to know a lot.

Haha thanks. I don't know a lot about making games perse but I do know a bit about art (and everything that comes with that haha) :)